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Tomorrow Will Be The Day?
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Tomorrow Will Be The Day? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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How is I go from having a wonderful chat with you < !signature-->To feeling completely utterly blue What I want to say never comes out We end up fighting, I'm not sure what about Want you to know that I love you That my love is forever true The distance makes it so hard, plays tricks on the mind and heart I pray that we never part Then I feel this anger rising up out of me Cursing the people who don't want you and I to be You're always gone too soon, like a dream you fade away Seems I never quite state what it is I need to say Then I get angry with myself...I should go to you All these feelings inside leave me confused as to what to do Make my heart stop bleeding, please take away the pain You know that I deeply love you, and I know you feel the same Want to wrap my arms around you and never let you go These tears fall from my eyes...I freely let them flow So now I am on my knees as I simply sit and pray That you'll come to me soon...maybe tomorrow will be the day ~Amy M. Kennedy" ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is such a treasure of emotions Amy. So tender, hopeful and a little sorrowful ... sigh. Wonderfully expressive writing. I do hope "tomorrow will be the day" for you. Lovely to read your gentle words ... Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
our poetry lets us say the things we cant say otherwise ... and your loving heart is on display in this emotional piece amy-girl ... beautiful sincere writing ... keep holding on to the dream...soon you'll be holding the real thing one day at a time sunshine love ya me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
If words could capture the beauty of this poem and make things different. All I can say Amy is love is worth fighting for, so I hope today is the day for you. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
AMY, a touching write sweetie... Distance can play it's part as you have stated yet with the faith in the love shared one can tackle the obstacle united go forward... Your poetry is so full of heartNsoul I adore that quality in your writing...  coco |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Amy, this one moved my heart...love need so many patience when we are impatience to see and be with each other...rather today than tomorrow....wonderful penned my friend ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Full of feeling and emotion, and as always well expressed. My heart goes out to you Amy, take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Intensely emotional Amy! To tell you the truth I don't think he knows how lucky he is to have such a warm heart waiting for him...someday he may regret his absence...have a nice holiday....ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the heart hopes what the mind does not know. . . wonderful Amy. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
A Very heart felt work here dear lady. great work. Love and light Richard |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, she knows, she reads your heart as you read hers. Your spirits are bound together, and you will have the time, I know you will. Remember what I said you know you have her heart as she has yours, and that would never have happened if you weren't fated, destined to be together. When it comes down to it, let the anger fade away, it only saps your energy. Let it flow away like water and you will be filled with the love that is truly there. This is as always one of your true heart poems, when you write this amazingly, I always know you are letting your heart speak. Wonderful writing sweetie, utterly wonderful. Take care of yourself, and take care of your love Look after yourself love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
..more like a cold day in hell!! Amy, sometimes, just let it go! good write. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey sweetie ~HUGS~ sometimes distance is very hard on relationships but you can work through it just don't let others tell you how to live your life, you know what you want and they have to accept that...sending you winged ~HUGS~ hope everthing is O'K Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kit~ a "treasure of emotion"...what a lovely thing to say. thanks for your lovely reply. it made my heart smile. take care Jan~ yes...poetry does just that. one of the reasons i love to write so much. thanks as always for your beautiful and heartfelt comment. as always you read me perfectly. thanks for the encouragement too. when laura and i are finally side by side together...remind me to give you a great huge hug! love ya Rosebud... yes i agree that love, true love, is worth fighting for. and i too hope "the day" is very soon. thanks for your reply. take care. Coco~ and i "adore" your response to this. you are always such a sweetie in that you find something wonderful and good to say about my writing or me that always makes me S M I L E  I thank you my friend!Charisma~ thanks for the wonderful comment. so glad i could "move your heart" that is quite flattering. also thanks for taking the time to read and reply. means a lot to me! EagleOne~ if heartfelt and emotional is how this came across then I am happy. that is what i was feeling and hoping for. thanks for reading and replying Ethome~ thanks my friend for replying. i just wanted to in my own way clear up a lil something. it's not a he it's a SHE lol. you are so kind and sweet in the fact that you would say they might regret this. but i can assure you we have many obstacles to overcome that are neither person's fault. but i do believe our love will make it! Sven~ ahhh so very true. you are such a wise and sweet poet my friend. thanks as always for your beautiful reply. you make my heart glad. Maxtec~ thank you kind sir for taking the time to stop in and respond. means much to me. take care of yourself. Marsha~ your replies are always some of my sweetest. i look forward to everytime i see your name on one of my posts. it's like an Angel has stopped by to read and impart some of her wisdom and advice. thanks ever so kindly for caring so much! kindasorta~ yes another thing i love about writing! you can just let it ALL go and fly off onto the page. it's a healthy way to deal with stress and everyday life. thanks for the reply Tracie~ angel winged hugs back to you my friend. and yes i am doing okay. just one of the lower points in my life where i felt the need to "get it all out" ya know. thanks for your concern. it is much appreciated as are you. thank you all for your kind replies. you make this gal smile! love, amy ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very emotional piece here, Aimster...great job! Nathan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I do hope tomorrow will be the day for you.I hope.loved it |
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