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Dream Lost |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH 
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Dream Lost O Eye of night see my fate Look down with saddened gaze Wait not for me who is late Wake me not from this haze Dream lost in autumn's mist Give way to slumberous night Summer's plight reminisced Winter's dawning comes twilight O Eye of night look my way Do not this my plight forsake Give me hope in dream's soothsay Still my rest and sorrow take Dream lost in forever bliss I Escape not from my fate Lost now in despair's abyss Love's sweet kiss do I await If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I SEE... I SEE... why you liked my work... We've got a love for proper syntax in common.. I look forward to reading lots more of your fine postings... Nicely done, John..  |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
I find myself writing quite often in an archaic voice. Must be a prvious life trying to come out. Thanks Nan! If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dream lost in autumn's mist Give way to slumberous night Summer's plight reminisced Winter's dawning comes twilight O Eye of night look my way Do not this my plight forsake Give me hope in dream's soothsay Still my rest and sorrow take Dream lost in forever bliss I Escape not from my fate Lost now in despair's abyss Love's sweet kiss do I await ============= excellent writing... your rhyme flow and cadence are perfect made for a great read aloud ... well chosen vocabulary as well bittersweet emotive poetry very well done, impressive work take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to agree with the others this is a real tight well balanced write with great words well arranged ... I enjoy this old style standard...very well done!! |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Splendid! I'm enjoying reading your work.. you are a very terrific writer. There seems to be a great amount of love in your heart. Thank you for sharing it! --Cassandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this wonderful piece.....enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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