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Free to Fall |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Free to Fall Barely contained by skin soon we will be joined, each part played in faith - uniquely scripted for us. Moments we have lived even so, each one magic my imagination ad lib cannot conjure nor portend but to call upon desire. Embodiments relished - the tears as we parted, peace, your gift of strength, down upon one knee, poised for a romeo query. Obstacles of mortal construct - merely passing matter and mass, no match for spirit. Corinne [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
A strong bond of love is most cherished thing to have... lovely poem... -Tier |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Corinne you're still writing beautiful soft and deep poems as well as ever if not better!! write on!! ethome |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Life can dish out what ever it may...but when love is strong and true...it only strengthens during the tough times...Excellent thoughts Corrine~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Your poems always sound deep water. With very little quarter. Enjoyed the swim. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes, Tiersdin, and thank you. Ethome, thank you for the lovely words. Butterfly, thank you! Seymour, what a wonderful sound - deep water. Thanks! Corinne |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
very beautiful and well written! I love the title! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Obstacles of mortal construct- merely passing matter and mass, no match for spirit esp enjoyed this stanza...truly well said!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Barely contained by skin soon we will be joined, each part played in faith - uniquely scripted for us. Moments we have lived even so, each one magic my imagination ad lib cannot conjure nor portend but to call upon desire. ============= C, i just love this poem... so very well written with your usual depth and clarity ... and so cool is the title .. awesome write girlie girl  truly.jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
This was a lovely lilting piece that flows over the soul beautifully. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No, no match for spirit at all...and the spirit is willing |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I can feel the electricity. The spirit is indeed willing. But what of the flesh? passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all for your inspirational comments! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, this was a wonderful piece. Enjoyed the read muchly... Park |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Corinne!! Denise |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Another excellent one, Cor! I might have to do me a search on you! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
fine verse, Corinne. "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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