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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Did you think you were special When you walked out my door? Do you think that my heart's Not been stepped on before? So you left me with nothing And went on your way Just a half hearted sorry What more could you say But I’m not your victim You’ve just made me stronger I give my heart up at The first sight no longer And it really is sad But it’s probably true By being cold hearted You’ve made me like you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Kevin, warm your heart...there is someone out there just waiting to grab it after it passes luke-warm...but you won't see her if your heart lays heavy... well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
What have written is so true. Its easy to love some one cold hearted cuz you think you can change them and make them feel. Beautifully written Birdee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ Hi there, sweetie ! 'You’ve just made me stronger' Strong is good ! And I don't believe the cold-hearted bit ... *Hugging you BIG TIME !* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin, powerful poignant piece from you. always have loved your style but this one really grabbed my attention. i'm with Marge on this one...don't think your heart is cold at all but i am glad to see it's made you stronger. take care ~amy~ |
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