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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Grace The wind whipped salt that claw without halt. The bore of the core shred sheets to the deck My shadow default to the dark and assault And I held the oak by swear and tie check. Like a pillar of salt locked on the wheel Rang the ships bell as I sliced through blue steel . Wheeled the prow that plowed through each swell Rode the waves swell into heaven then hell. She could yaw, was strong and with no part frail I had faith in the board of this ladylove. Steadied her course through the force of the gale And watched the sky for a sign from above. I stood eyes blazing hands without feel Wishing and waiting the waters to heal. When out from the black showed a crack in the cloud And I shouted thank heaven for lifting hells shroud. The sun bathed my face in a warming embrace And I lowered my head in a prayer for his grace. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 always, always you know of course how much this likes me and I love how you make my library grow and glow |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just when you need "him" most is when you can most assuredly find him. Now we all know that "he" is constantly with us but it is so nice when we are graced with that special sign. Wonderful read from you. Much enjoyed. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Amazing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kerilea, You are my sunshine. *L* Mark, Glad you enjoyed. Serenity, Amazing right back at you, thanks Sy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Usually I get sea sick but you sail us along with grace and ease.. sorry for the bad metaphors...lol... Beautiful poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i could feel the rocking of the ship..a stormy ride it was ha..nicely done..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brian, Thanks for the beautiful. Victoria, Thanks for the nicely done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You took us through the storm into serenity. A special gift you have. 'The sun bathed my face in a warming embrace And I lowered my head in a prayer for his grace.' May we always remember to acknowledge His grace. I think your compass is right-on. Thank you, dear friend. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Seymour, my friend, I love your words and your thoughts...powerful and strong. jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She could yaw, was strong and with no part frail I had faith in the board of this ladylove. Steadied her course through the force of the gale And watched the sky for a sign from above. I stood eyes blazing hands without feel Wishing and waiting the waters to heal. When out from the black showed a crack in the cloud And I shouted thank heaven for lifting hells shroud. The sun bathed my face in a warming embrace And I lowered my head in a prayer for his grace. =============== "I stood eyes blazing hands without feel Wishing and waiting the waters to heal. When out from the black showed a crack in the cloud And I shouted thank heaven for lifting hells shroud" WOW how very very way cool ... what amazing imagery and the way you worked and built up the intensity in this... very masterful poetry-oh wise one...very  later-no-ship-of-fools-gator stinky winkie lol  Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you sweet. *L* Jwesley, Thank you for the read and nice comment. JM, Water, water everywhere and all the boards did shriek. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you so much for the read and enjoy. |
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