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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Leftover Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Leftover Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~ Waning ~ Oh, leftover Moon hanging high in my morning not used by lovers in the night A paled shimmer of promise coming when curtains fall the next twilight Oh, leftover moon of lovers seen after the breaking of the dawn Save your light for the love some sweet thought will spawn ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I saw the leftover moon the other morning..it was a full beauty, Marge...it is always one of the first things to capture my attention especially in clear skies...thank you for sharing ..huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i feel like the leftover moon this morning. *sigh* you've penned my heart, marge.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is a really great piece. The leftover moon, I really love this image. Wonderful work from you. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Just when I thought all the great poems about the moon had been written, you create another beauty. Loved it! Deb |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A paled shimmer of promise coming when curtains fall the next twilight Oh, leftover moon of lovers seen after the breaking of the dawn ============= *sigh* ..beautiful margie-girl ... poetry in motion...you and your lovely pennings of the moon. later-moonshine-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now who could not be inspired to take any left over and make good use of it...especially in the light of this!?... Well done {~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Now its my turn to compliment your moon poem. This is teriffic, creative, not your ordinary moon poem! And I like the way you formatted it! The moon does have a changing personality..we could write a book about him I think! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge, oh my, love the imagery you weave inhere. as always superb.....and I love this form. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love the moon and all the promise of romance it has. This beautiful poem tells of the sadness I feel as I wait again for the fulness of the moon and hope that maybe this time the promises of romance can come true. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--YOU have spawned a sweet thought with this lovely moon poem. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That leftover moon is there for beautiful hearts such as yours that KNOW that love isn't only for the night. Oh, what wonderful times the morning is...wouldn't you agree? Yes, of course YOU WOULD KNOW!!!  Beautiful my sweet friend, just as you are in so many ways. Hugs and love to you.A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~Wynter~~Doreen and Marsha~~BloomingRose & JanetMarie~~Mark Christopher Bohannan~~SongBird and Charisma~~StarTime & Martie~~*Thanks*~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, this is an incredible poem! What beauty! What thought! It could well be one of the greates...huh? The last word is not spam?...er, oops! ummm....nice poem, Marge  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ *wink* Gotcha covered ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
the title and the poem, they are so real and beautiful, i am so thankful to have read it, im serious this is my favorite that you have writen Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetLittleAngryHeartRedBraids~ What a special treat to see you sharing my moon. Love you and have missed you. Have a Happy Christmas Holiday little Hawaii girl. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge it always does hang there with such promise for the next night....hauntingly beautiful! Full of the leftover light of night it leaves a yearning for romantic tenderness...love it!! |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
Marge... So simple yet so complex So short yet so full of meaning So small yet so great You write excellent, love it... -Ramses- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~ETHome~ When I stepped into my yard the other morning - there she was just hanging there - seemingly not used-up from the night of lovers - thusly was spawned this little jewel. I've grown quite fond of it. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it too. Ramses~ I certainly appreciate your reply. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, you always write such beautiful moonshine and this is no exception write on, live long Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Thank you for enjoying it. She surely glows with inspiration. I just grab a little moonbeam and hang on. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Really lovely I like this |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very dreamy. I loved it, great job. Love and light, Richard |
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