Open Poetry #11 |
Anthology of a few sailing poems... |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
If I were but a captain, and you my Lorelei, I'd sail my ship upon the rocks, for in your arms to die, In the rolling, tossing tempest, you'd be the eye of calm, I'd lay my head upon your breast, to feel its soothing balm, As trade winds blow, to fill my sails, I'd feel as if been kissed, By beauteous goddess of the sea, she'd come from evening's mist, If I were but a captain, I'd sail the ocean blue, Seeking out my goddess fair, to sail away with you. Take my hand and sail with me, upon love's passion ship, Let me taste of satin lips, from forth your fountain sip, As I hold you in my arms, I touch upon night's sky, And sail the seas of all I dream, when you I do espy, I feel cool winds off ocean waves, soft kiss upon my cheek, When I hear sweet voice of Rose, of you of whom I seek, I feel the warmth of beating heart, when on ship's brow we stand, As I gaze on satin bloom, and touch upon your hand, A' sail alone forevermore, we'll sail to distant star, With Luna's glow our guiding light, to lead us from afar, O' tarry not on rocky shore, come sail to welkin blue, To feel the depth of my desire, my love I pledge to you. I take you gently in my arms, and feel your warm embrace, As light of heaven's stars above, shines down upon your face, I see the glow of all my dreams, within your beauty there, And touch upon moon's silver beams, as stroke your silken hair, I hear sweet music of the muse, we sail throughout the night, Free as the summer winds that blow, our hearts as one unite, You are my goddess, Aphrodite, you touch within my soul, And leave therein a satin bloom, a rose that makes me whole, I feel the splendor of the night, as hear your siren's song, Breathing in your fragrant scent, I capture all I long, For time stands still, my Venus fair, while I am in your arms, The moon itself, in sky above, cedes to your beauteous charms, My eyes drink of your loveliness, soft grace of supple limb, Sweet creature of the welkin blue, angelic seraphim, I kiss the smoothness of your skin, as gaze into your eyes, With soft caress, on passion's ship, a' sail across night's skies, The morning star, you are the night, we sail 'cross heaven's floor, Upon the clouds on winds of time, my darling Terpsichore, I sing to you love's madrigal, I'll love you evermore, I whisper softly to the wind, I love you evermore. Last night I sailed to Zanzibar, across the seven seas, Danced a dance with Terpsichore, upon soft evening's breeze, I plucked a flower from the skies, a rose named Southern Cross, And sang to her love's madrigal, upon her heart emboss, The signature of all I am, of all I'll ever be, For while I hold her in my arms, 'tis only Rose I see, I long to feel her soft caress, to of her passions sip, 'Til once again sail seven seas, upon night's sailing ship. He was but a mortal man, who touched upon a star, Who came to him in still of night, and carried him afar, Beyond the mountain's snowcapped peak, rushing crystal streams, Beyond Polaris and his minions, unto the land of Dreams, Where he held her in his arms, touched upon silk skin, Felt the warmth of her desire, welling from within, Sweet tender lips in passion pressed, meld in warm embrace, Breeched stone walls of heart's escarp, Urania's heavenly grace, His eyes drank of her loveliness, soft touch of supple limb, Caressed the smoothness of her face, angelic seraphim, Once upon a memory, he gazed into her eyes, Once upon a memory, he sailed upon night's skies. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I applaud you... I LOVE romantic poems, and this one certainly ranks among the best of them... -Tier |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I take you gently in my arms, and feel your warm embrace, As light of heaven's stars above, shines down upon your face, I see the glow of all my dreams, within your beauty there, And touch upon moon's silver beams, as stroke your silken hair, I hear sweet music of the muse, we sail throughout the night, Free as the summer winds that blow, our hearts as one unite, You are my goddess, Aphrodite, you touch within my soul, And leave therein a satin bloom, a rose that makes me whole, I feel the splendor of the night, as hear your siren's song, Breathing in your fragrant scent, I capture all I long, For time stands still, my Venus fair, while I am in our arms, The moon itself, in sky above, cedes to your beauteous charms, My eyes drink of your loveliness, soft grace of supple limb, Sweet creature of the welkin blue, angelic seraphim, I kiss the smoothness of your skin, as gaze into your eyes, With soft caress, on passion's ship, a' sail across night's skies, The morning star, you are the night, we sail 'cross heaven's floor, Upon the clouds on winds of time, my darling Terpsichore, I sing to you love's madrigal, I'll love you evermore, I whisper softly to the wind, I love you evermore. Last night I sailed to Zanzibar, across the seven seas, Danced a dance with Terpsichore, upon soft evening's breeze, I plucked a flower from the skies, a rose named Southern Cross, And sang to her love's madrigal, upon her heart emboss, The signature of all I am, of all I'll ever be, For while I hold her in my arms, 'tis only Rose I see, I long to feel her soft caress, to of her passion sip, 'Til once again sail seven seas, upon night's sailing ship. He was but a mortal man, who touched upon a star, Who came to him in still of night, and carried him afar, Beyond the mountain's snowcapped peak, rushing crystal streams, Beyond Polaris and his minions, unto the land of Dreams, Where he held her in his arms, touched upon silk skin, Felt the warmth of her desire, welling from within, Sweet tender lips in passion pressed, meld in warm embrace, Breeched stone walls of heart's escarp, Urania's heavenly grace, His eyes drank of her loveliness, soft touch of supple limb, Caressed the smoothness of her face, angelic seraphim, Once upon a memory, he gazed into her eyes, Once upon a memory, he sailed upon night's skies. =================== WOW ... I was reading this beauty of grace and cadence aloud but it seems to have taken my breath away....my goodness this is exquisite. what a perfect addition to my collection of yours...so many of your amazing Sailing poems and images gathered here in one exceptional piece ... superb offering from your pen poet sir ... as always...you awe this reader take care jm |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh Poetry doesn't get much better than this! You are the master of the romantic poem sir and you never fail to deliver! Magnificent. Are you submitting this to the main site? You better! And may we use it for the Valentine's issue of Digital Passions? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--You know this is one of my favorites...you write with such perfection, my friend...exquisite! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Mike what a fabulous anthology..well written and you left very little out...such magical inspired writing about the magic of the open seas and skies.....wonderful sort of storybook love stories involved ..... a plentitude of imagination!!! good stuff!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mike* I seem to say this alot lately in regards to your work...but once again you have me in AWE of your talent!! The beautiful imagery and the gentle flow of this weave floated like the gentle waves washing upon the shore of sunkissed sands...Truly and most sincerely one of the most beautiful pieces I have had the pleasure to read. It's an honor to share the pages of Passions with such a talented poet...thank you~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Tiersdin... I am glad you enjoyed my little nautical celestial voyage. Thank you very much for the comment. Janet Marie... you're making me blush here... I really appreciate the comments and am glad you liked the poem. Ms. deVine... danke for the exceedingly gracious reply. A sigh from you is like manna from heaven... *smile* Martie... and you know you are one of my favorites... thank you so much my friend. ethome... thank you so much for the gracious comment. glad you took the time to read my efforts and enjoyed. Butterflies_don't_cry... butterflies are but rainbowed roses floating on the wind. What a wonderful comment. I am honored and humbled by your reply. |
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artsygrl Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 55Florida |
you have written every girl's dream here...I simply adore the romantic..wonderful!!!!!111 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
With mythical stars as your guide, your muse enraptured by you words you will not want for maidens on this voyage. Corinne |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, exquisite writing, Mike! One of my all time favorites too! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ These are so beautiful. What a captivating grouping of sea-faring songs. You certainly write with the cadence of elegance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
artsygrl... thank you for reading and replying... appreciate your comments... *smile* Corrine...thank you so much for the gracious reply... Denise and Marge... you can both come sailing with me anytime... appreciate the replies.. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cool!! When do we set sail?! Denise |
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