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With These Words |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
With these words feelings unsaid timidity lay unbound, unwed Last sung this tune this accolade doff now, this mask of my charade Dare I voice the music so long unsung dare I hope the tune’s not wrong Have faith in my love’s imagination Forget my past love’s hesitation Seek me thus in this new year For I do love you with hope and fear |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
reminds me of a Joni Mitchell song... "it all comes down to you... constant stranger-- you're a kind person - you're a cold person too... ...You're a brute, you're an angel you can crawl, y'can fly too..." and so we meet ourselves...hugs. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening Poet deVine, You write powerful and also lovely words. This writing is very strong indeed with meaning to me. I am very glad that I stopped by for a read. BC |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you! Bill, always nice to see you too.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nothing ventured, nothing gained! Go for it, Sharon!! Great poem!! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you only live once my friend. . . wonderful from you. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely, PDV... I think we've all experienced the angst of wanting things to go forward and yet being terrified that we'll say something to ruin it... The Sinatras sang "and then I go and spoil it all by saying something stupid like I love you." (Yup... I'm old. *G*) I occasionally get blasted for my openness... and that's not fun... however, having someone leave my life forever and spending decades wondering if they ever knew I loved them makes the decision easy for me... I never want that hell again! I guess I'd rather live with rejection than doubt. *S* Go for it... and good luck!!  [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Miss deVine, Wonderful poetry here, hope and fear are good allies for one seeking the truth and you my friend deserve the very best now and always. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed the read!!!!!!! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Dare I voice the music so long unsung dare I hope the tune’s not wrong" It must be frightening to fall in love again after so long. You describe the feelings beautifully, as always. Best of luck, my friend! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
To be loved - one must love - with all the risks that that implies - you've expressed this so beautifully |
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