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The True Of Salt
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The True Of Salt |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I never quite finished this poem, I think it's done now. The true of salt We are conceived of the salt of the sea The ocean its motion and filigree. And when one of our loved ones say us goodby We cry a salt tear from the source in our eye. We offer salute their return to the sea Unto the creators genesis trustee. There are no words that can say them goodbye Except from the salt of a tear in your eye. You can always spare a drop for the dead There is enough for a tear to be shed. We offer the soul of our birth and our goal The very salt that's the source of our soul. To all that have come and all that have gone. And even of those of yet to be born. Cry for your loved ones, cry them goodbye Shed you a tear of the salt of your eye. Give back a drop of inceptions salt sea For birth, its end and perpetuity. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"There are no words that can say them goodbye Except from the salt of a tear in your eye" This is really wonderful Seymour  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Without salt, life would not be so flavored... This is another keeper Sy...you are filling my library... I shall build an annex... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We are conceived of the salt of the sea The ocean its motion and filigree. ================== We offer salute their return to the sea Unto the creators genesis trustee. There are no words that can say them goodbye Except from the salt of a tear in your eye. ================= To all that have come and all that have gone. And even of those of yet to be born. Cry for your loved ones, cry them goodbye Shed you a tear of the salt of your eye. Give back a drop of inceptions salt sea For birth, its end and perpetuity. ================= yes ... it is done...very very well done awesome...you are  its perfect ... she will love it ... how could she not...look who wrote it *winkiewinkie* me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful poem, Sy...and so true and wise..hugs! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, So glad you approve, thank you. Sunshine, Thank you Karilea, *L*. JM, Thank you sweetie winkiewinkie Stinky. Martie, Thank you for the hugs. *L* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy - Great poem written in your style of quirky slant that always works. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
THank you LngJhnAg, It's nice to see you so active again. By the way did you have a good time at Nans. |
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