Open Poetry #11 |
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Love’s Star Flight |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada ![]() |
Love’s Star Flight Karen Torbiak 2000 Wrapping myself in the comforting velvet of a warm summer’s night I feel my soul begin to weave magic and fantasy around me Star dust drips upon me falling from a shooting star as it leaves a trail of brilliance blazing across a cloudless start filled sky My spirit sings with joy as the magic takes me and I send a call into the celestial heavens for a steed with which to ride among the distant stars Answering my call as I knew he would for the winged horse alighted with gentle quietness before me folding back his magnificent white wings and waiting patiently for me Climbing onto his powerful bare back I signaled for him to take me on a flight and return me for a short time to the stars where I belong With powerful wings he launches us and wraps me in more star dust that my mortal body feel only the beauty of such a ride as this With time now forgotten in the joy of watching worlds passing us at tremendous speeds I send my spirit into the very heart of the stars where I rejoice with the freedom of wonder and awe at the beauty my eyes behold The winds of the cosmos flows over me with a coolness that caresses my body as all my senses spring to life to be reflected in eyes that sparkle with discovery and delight My eyes alight on distant movement that I know is not normally present in the celestial heavens in which my flight takes place As we draw closer I recognize another steed as my own on flight such as I in the magic of this starry realm with a man mounted securely on the winged horse’s back I am drawn to his eyes where I see passion and love of the stars reflected as they sparkle with delight at the adventure we share Without a word our mystical steeds a line with one another and change course to a distant star where I have never been before Time stands still as we fly past worlds without end on a journey of the heart and soul just beginning to understand eternal love and true fantasy has brought us together to share this Love’s Star Flight where love has it’s beginning Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Startime, I so very much enjoyed the ride to the stars, you put much feeling in to it and I could really piture my trip, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Startime, your poetry is growing and so are you. write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What marvelous imagination! This is a love poem at the height of fantasy...very very creative!! |
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