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When I Dream 2 of 5 |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
When I Dream #2 Richard Maxfield 6-10-2000 I vision your smile Mouth slightly opened Your lips apart Imagining my mouth Upon yours It affects my heart Our lips together Our tongues intertwined Drawing your body to me Sweet taste of wine My arms around you With a slight haste I press you tightly Loves sweetest taste Our bodies are one Heated from the blazing sun I lay you down Look into your eyes You are my only one As I touch Your soft world I see the want Feel the need Hunger of your sighs Through the mornings light We will soar in desire You are my only addiction All that I require |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
absolutely beautiful emotions and imagery. A delightful write. I enjoy your work! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Looking forward to the others......damn, it's hot in here..........  -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Just as I imagined a real "Hot" one...How soon can we see 3,4,and 5?  (I probably should get some oxygen before then as I know I'm gonna be out-a breath)...hehe... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my....are you dreaming.....or do I.....Sea is right, its warm inhere. Charisma |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
back again to add yet ANOTHER one..hehe ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I want to say thank you to all that remarked on my poems. I know I go over the edge sometimes. Oh well that is me in this life. I hope all have a wonderful Christmas. Love and life, Richard |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Richard, I must say, keep going over the edge, I quite enjoy the edge, the wild side. hehe. beautiful and so romantic. |
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