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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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May i be your private dancer? < !signature-->your Tina Turner of the night Will you fulfil my fantasy? in reflection of your eyes dancing seductively conducting your sighs let vibrations within my soul dazzle your mind ~accept~ the silhouette of my body Will you lend me a moment of your time? will you fulfill my fantasy? my audience in candlelight let me be your private dancer your Tina Turner of the night A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-11-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
oohh...I heard some good vibrations in this one... well done Victoria... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ohhhhh, I do love that song and this poem as well  -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Once again the answer is yes...you can be my movie star...give me a private performance...I will watch every move and beg for more...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sunshine..i love her music..saw her the other night on tv..she looks great..thank you for peeking in Sunshine Sea..thank you so much for visiting..nice to hear from you:0 James..as long as you dont tell ha..shhhh  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I have heard that song too, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) This dances with magic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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