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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-12-11 12:14 PM


                                  May i be your private dancer?
                                    your Tina Turner of the night
                                       Will you fulfil my fantasy?
                                      in reflection of your eyes
                                       dancing seductively
                                       conducting your sighs
                                         let vibrations
                                         within my soul
                                      dazzle your  mind
                                          ~accept~
                                  the silhouette of my body
                                          Will you lend me
                                      a moment of your time?
                                    will you fulfill my fantasy?
                                         my  audience in candlelight
                                    let me be your private dancer
                                    your Tina Turner of the night


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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  





[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-11-2000).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-11 12:16 PM


oohh...I heard some good vibrations in this one...

well done Victoria...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2000-12-11 12:19 PM


Ohhhhh, I do love that song and this poem as well   -SEA
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3 posted 2000-12-11 02:07 PM


Once again the answer is yes...you can be my movie star...give me a private performance...I will watch every move and beg for more...James
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4 posted 2000-12-11 08:33 PM


Sunshine..i love her music..saw her the other night on tv..she looks great..thank you for peeking in Sunshine

Sea..thank you so much for visiting..nice to hear from you:0

James..as long as you dont tell ha..shhhh

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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5 posted 2002-04-06 08:57 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I have heard that song too, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) This dances with magic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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