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From My Lips, Into Your Ear
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From My Lips, Into Your Ear |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Heart in pause as I pen word from soul to heart to ears unheard. Wildly now, how my heart beats. (Native drum cannot compete...) Weary, I live life absurd, awaiting mercy of your word. My soul, she moans, to be complete. If only life would be so sweet. If love were but a wish away, you would have been here yesterday. I'll petition God to have you near. I'll whisper, "please" into your ear... If longing is but madness, kind, know that you're already mine. And even should it end like this-- you've already made me Bliss. *repost from Open #6* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Can't remember if I caught this in #6 but wow..... "If love were but a wish away, you would have been here yesterday." I loved those lines best......  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't remember responding to this in six, but I am VERY Glad you posted it today...this speaks to me...a lot... I would have liked to have written this one...but I am glad you did... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My soul, she moans, to be complete. If only life would be so sweet. If love were but a wish away, you would have been here yesterday. I'll petition God to have you near. I'll whisper, "please" into your ear... If longing is but madness, kind, know that you're already mine. And even should it end like this-- you've already made me Bliss. ================== your bliss ... is my bliss and oh how I love when you write like this  you been doing this so well for so long now... second skin baby...its in your blood love ya me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i wasn't even here during Open 6, so thanks for the repost. this is one of those ones where you get to the end and say "why didn't i think of that". a complex twist of words and rhyme with themes that i know at least I can relate to. such style Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I too was not present when open #6 was up so thank you for reposting it my friend. This is just as lovely as your heart and I am left with a gentle calmness now because of you so I thank you for that as well. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Very nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!! Please submit this!!! PLEASE!!! Don't make me come over there.... |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
~Sigh-Sigh-Sigh~...Seems like I've been doing alot of this lately...What wonderful words you have written...Loved it..Muchly... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity, this is truly wonderful, I wasn't here for #6 or I don't think I was. (I may have been, but if I'd have read this I would definitely have replied) Anyway I'm replying now, and this is an excellant piece of writing. And I love it, really great work. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A quick thank you to you all, and sorry about the repost, but this one just fit someone's heart so well, that I reposted it for HER...smiles to you who understand. And love and gratitude to you all. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Just came back to add you to my quickly growing library..Loved reading this again as much as the first time.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really enjoyed the read. Way good writing. love and light, Richard |
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