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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Kiss |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Kiss By Richard Maxfield 8-31-2000 My Love My dearest one I reach out to you It’s you only you will do You know what I require A drink from your loving cup Feel my heart with in your hands I need to taste the sweetness of your flesh Make love to you and hold you as the hours pass Bodies and souls entwined melting into one mortal flesh. Lay with you through out the night until the morning’s light Spending ever bit of energy on love and passion Your heart and body close to mine. Sleeping with you in my arms In peace and contentment Sharing the same dream Breathing in rhythm Awaken in passion To start yet again Your what need Its only you My love kiss |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very creative..nicely done..enjoyed your words Richard  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the way you wrote this..James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some lovely lines Richard... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Very lovely and creative! I love the design and the way it all fit so smoothly. Do I not know you from Starlite Cafe as well? You possess exquisite talent! I will look for more in the future! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Richard~  Oh yes, this is very dreamy.....now I got the warm fuzzies! -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This holds a lot of passion, loved the format and the way it held together.... "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I loved the format, the structure, and the easy way this flows , and it so does remind me of a soft warm kiss. Beautiful work here Richard. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
richard~ loved the way you structured this and the sincerity felt throughout. excellent piece written with your heart and soul. simply beautiful! take care. ~amy~ |
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