Open Poetry #11 |
The Depths of Happiness |
Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
The Depths of Happiness Swirling, dancing near a rainbow With butterflies and wild horses Flying pass, running free Staring at the sunset Arms around you sitting on the sand Waves coming forth, winds blowing Dinner for two, candlelights Hands in hands, kisses on the pavement Loving till the morning sun ~~Daniel J D~~ Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Daniel what beautiful pictures you paint with your words. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
romantic by night sharing love by candlelight lost in cherished height wonderful imagery of love. (hugs)) Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Dee, and Charisma, Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Good to reflect on some of life's wonderful gifts. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes a romantic relationship can bring much happiness...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would get astride the horses running wild to feel the wind in my face and ride on toward the orange sunset... Daniel this is wonderful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
James, and Sunshine, Your comments are so wonderful. Thank you, let's get on that ride. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ I wish I was there!!! ***SIGH*** -SEA |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
What a perfect night.....you have painted such a beautiful picture.... Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, and Greeneyes, Thank you I am glad you enjoyed the view and feel. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Daniel, this one sings to me you know that eh... I'm hooked on rainbows what can I say.... Enjoyed this read and my thanks for sharing once again... coco |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Daniel* Wow...you've blown me away with your weaving on this one!!! Awesome write full of imagery and flow that makes a poem...poetry~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
**Smooth as cream and pretty as a picture!!** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` mutington/joyce "I can live by myself, but not within myself." |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Coco, Butterflies, and Muttington, Thank you for the great replies, I am so happy you enjoyed this poem. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh my gosh, I want this. Where do I sign up. *sigh* oh yes these visions are priceless and perfect. Thank you, thank you. Much love to you from me. A hug for the beauty you have given me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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