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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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How is it? I could love you not? No rhyme, no reason, nothing, ought... even though slow card--revealed - TRUMP your king queen, concealed.. and as I bid another plan, and beg of you to understand... another feeling, unrevealed-- so glad I'm dealt another hand... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Amen  K |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Did Emily Dickinson just walk into your skin? Now that we've had that conversation before, I notice a lot of influence. Good!Mike |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I think you've come up trumps with this, serenity. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Delightful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Had to thank Kamla...(I would have typed "k" ? but I LOVE YER NAME. Thank you much, lovie. and Mike---gawd, i sure hope so...would explain much...I am better now...so be "e" ing you soon...love ya lots me lovely! (Alliteration?) LAUGHING out LOUD...LOL Dee thank you muchly....I do so much appreciate it.... Mom? Doncha love me anymore? SIGH...OH. SIGH...AND GREAT BIG LAUGHING HUGS, to you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and as I bid another plan, and beg of you to understand... another feeling, unrevealed-- so glad I'm dealt another hand... ============ doing card tricks baby ??  no... more like laying them all out on the table ... very cool poem me twin ... VERY. later-queen-of poetry-gator me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
No slight of hand in this one my dear. Just plain ole deal 'em and play 'em and you played them perfectly. Hugs to you and of course mom still loves ya just as this cowboy does. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I hope your deuce is wild! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I can never get the trumps and the deuces, the aces or the queens, but somehow I manage to pull the right card every time. Wonderful rendition! -me |
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