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Open Poetry #11

Dancing Fairy Of The Night

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2000-12-09 09:33 PM

The fairy princess takes to flight,
Dancing to music of the night.
Her flowing hair and silky gown
Glide through the air as she spins around.

The enchantment of the stars above
Sprinkle their stardust on songs of love.
And searching through the mist of time
For willing hearts and love sublime.

Casting out her magic spells
To lovers on a carousel.
Within the flames she did ignite
The sparks between two hearts tonight.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-12-09 10:07 PM

Very pretty Eloise...this likes me...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-12-10 12:57 PM

Oh, Eloise~
This is just so lovely.
The tempo makes for a wonderful read aloud piece.
Thoroughly enjoyed it again and again.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

3 posted 2000-12-10 12:11 PM

Thank you Sunshine and Marge. And somehow I knew you would like this Marge. It just kind of screams "MARGE"!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-12-10 04:37 PM

This is enchanting, Eloise! Very lovely!

Denise

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-12-10 04:49 PM

I'm ready for her to ignite my flames...James

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

6 posted 2000-12-10 05:03 PM

This is very lovely and has a very wonderful meter. Romantic fantasy...I love it!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2000-12-10 05:04 PM

tell her to cast some spells my way

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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