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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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* this didn't get much of a response the first time, just thought I'd see how it does now.........  She looked at you with puppy dog eyes wondering if ~ or when you'd ever realize She was so in love it was always you all the while breaking her heart that you hadn't a clue She wanted you so much and was quite willing to prove every day she hoped you'd make a move She waited so long still you could never see she, with puppy dog eyes ~your missed destiny ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good read I enjoyed it very much. i often wonder if I have walked by the one that i could spend my life with and never know it. Richard |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Believe you hit the nail head my friend. I can think of some I felt exactly that way about...later. Missed My destiny, or maybe one didn't miss it really...who knows which destiny was the right one?? But we can dream about thos "puppy dog eys" can't we, and really wonder...was that truly the "missed destiny" in my life....??? loved it... jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, I didn't see this the first time, otherwise I would have replied, you know I would. I love it, it reminds me of those days that seem so long ago. Really great write from you love as always, excellant work. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved this SEA! Thanks for re-posting it, I didn't see it first time around. It brought a vivid "Normal Rockwell" type image to my mind. I feel like breaking out the paints ... a young girl, old-fashioned school-desk, chin on hand, eyes fluttering in admiration, with boy busily going on about life unnoticing. Lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Sea...I really like this..Thanks for bringing it back out , I surely wouldn't have wanted to miss it... Hugs.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA, oh shining SEA if I missed this the first time I am so sorry SEA, where have you been I miss my inspiration hurry back to us Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Missy Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 28USA |
Wonderful write. I have been there!!! I was waiting for that special one to notice, and good news, he did. Turns out he was doing the same. I loved this poem so much, it really hit home!!! Glad we didn't miss! Missy |
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