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Wee Elf's Christmas
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Wee Elf's Christmas |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wee elf was smitten, By love bug bitten, In love did fall, With real cute doll, A perfect match, A cabbage patch, Her name was Sue, Her eyes were blue, Red was her hair, White skin so fair, Twelve inches high, Wee elf would sigh, I love you Sue, Red, white and blue. Then Christmas Eve, Wee elf did grieve, A wee boo hoo, For blue eyed Sue, Was called away, To Santa's sleigh, To join the toys, For girls and boys, Sue climbed inside, As wee elf cried, Don't leave me Sue, What will I do? It's idiotic, Unpatriotic, To take my Sue, Wee elf did stew. Into night sky, Did Santa fly, With smallest elf, Beside himself, For Sue was gone, By Christmas dawn, Wee elf so blue, He missed his Sue, But back to work, For elves can't shirk, Into toy shop, Elf would not stop, Through Christmas Day, No time to play. Then Mrs. Claus, said, wee elf pause, Go to the tree, My friend so wee, You plumb forgot, What Santa brought, Your Christmas gift, Nick will be miffed, If you don't open, He was a hope'n That you'd be glad, And lose your sad, So to the tree, Went elf so wee, Unwrapped his present, T'was heaven sent, A great surprise, Blue were her eyes, Red was her hair, White skin so fair, Elf pulled her string, and heard her sing, My name is Sue, And I love you. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwww ! Thank you, Santa Mike ! I believe !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
aww man Mike this brought a tear and a smile no lie!! cooooooool yuh!!!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Loud, thundering applause! Well done Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Delightful!! This is the sort of stuff from which classics are made!!! Bravo! Standing O!!! ***** So glad I read! May I place a copy in my favorites file? Might I read it to children at school this coming week?? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I just love your elf stories...and this one is right up there with the best of them...thanks for the sweet sweet story |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It wouldn't be Christmas without more Wee Elf tales. Thank you for bringing such enjoyment. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Marge... I can't think of a compliment better than an awwwwwww from you... *smile* walt...glad ya liked...thanks for the reply. Interloper...I truly appreciate the response. Thank you for reading and enjoying. VAS... wee elf is certainly meant for the children. (in all of us) I would be honored if you wanted to read it to the schoolkids... (p.s. not trying to be too self-promoting, but the previously written wee elfs are in Holiday Forum.) Paula... thank you ever so much for the gracious reply. I kinda like wee elf myself...*smile* inot2B...appreciate the wonderful reply. Thanks so much. Merry Christmas! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mike* This is printing as I type...my daughter will love this as much as I did...thank you for sharing a smile with me tonight~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ADORABLE..I LOVE IT..very creative:0 ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
*BUMP YUH |
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