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Mereel79
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since 2000-11-27
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0 posted 2000-12-09 02:33 AM



Sitting under a tree of uncertainty she waits for me
She beckons my heart and touch’s my soul but are we ever to be
Drawn in by a kind nature and an innocent soul and heart
I didn’t want there to ever be an us, but now I don’t ever want to be apart

You see there is a fence that separates our bodies and souls
Left with only kilobyte kisses and words that begin to take their toll
Why must the one I find be too young to hold and too young to kiss
But above all else, old enough to miss

I’ll keep on looking for the gate on this fence of 3 years long
Hoping that your feelings will stay as strong
If I am to find it early will they look at me in disgust
Will they ever understand this is more than a brief moment of lust

The leap of faith I will take, in your arms I hope to land




Our lives are better left to chance
I could have missed the pain
But I'd of had to miss the dance

© Copyright 2000 James Ross - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-09 08:30 AM


kilobyte kisses...

interesting


Karilea
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Aimster
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2 posted 2000-12-09 03:11 PM


very powerful!! this one spoke volumes
as though the words leapt off the page
at me making me want to read more and
more. sounds like this is very complex.
i hope it works out for the best for you.
take care! excellent write...

~amy~

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3 posted 2000-12-10 03:55 PM


Mereel~
What a poignantly longing write.

'Why must the one I find be too young to hold and too young to kiss
But above all else, old enough to miss'


Wow !
Hopefully time will make a difference.
Welcome to Passions.  
~*Marge*~



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Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-12-11 06:32 AM


This feels like a deep thought...many deep thoughts., I enjoyed reading.



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of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


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