My friend . . . Sunshine's Senryu

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Open Poetry #11

My friend . . . Sunshine's Senryu

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2000-12-09 12:18 PM

we can always talk
but your soul you cannot caulk
I will be your friend
~*~
you have strength, you know,
willow bends but does not break
I talk to my friend
~*~
you shall never balk
as hand in hand we shall walk
while we talk, my friend

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-12-09 08:05 AM

friends come simply, kind
know what forever's on your mind
friendship always binds
~ * ~
camaraderie
holds together you and me
simple comes our song
~ * ~
in the blue is you
comes sweet light from my sunshine
in the written lines
~ * ~

Thank you Interloper!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-12-09 07:35 PM

lovely lovely lines...i am esp impressed with the line 'willow bends but does not break"

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2000-12-09 08:24 PM

wonderful senryu's my friend....love them

Charisma

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2000-12-09 08:27 PM

Interloper~ Very nice!

-SEA

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2000-12-10 09:20 PM

Sunshine~
au contaire (?) itis I who thank you

kaile~
Thank you. I didn't know you had esp

]

Charisma~
Thanks for the read. glad yo enjoyed.

SEA~
Yes, you are

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2000-12-10 09:30 PM

this is wonderful my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

10 posted 2000-12-10 10:44 PM

INTERLOPER........... a very nice write

coco

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2000-12-10 11:03 PM

*sigh* your words flow with beauty and song. Very well done. Much love from me to you

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

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