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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Whipped (Senryu/Haiku) I’m addicted yes Sugar sweet joy of the buds Sin of supple cream Delicate sweet dance Chase by tongue and lips of mouth Cream of taste delight Hopeless need of it Crave by day and night, oh please Whip me some cream babe. James Parker Haley Dec 8, 200   [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
are you trying to insight a riot ???  have you been in my raspberry tea???  so ya got it bad for cool whip huh p-babes LOL digging that second senyru ... all we need now is a tub full of jello your too cute for your own good... later-sweetteaseofsenyru-gator jm |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I'm still giggling at JanetMarie's 'riot' comment Haleyja, this is deliciously sweet N refreshingly cool N soothingly delightful.. Thank you for this splendid treat oops I meant read coco |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
HHHEEYYYYYY Parker....I stuck my finger in the bowl...wanna lick? |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Riot.... yeah a whip cream riot.. I don't know where you gals minds are at. Parker |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wowza now this was quite an interesting read Parker...lol. really enjoyed this, very cute! take care. Amy |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Amy, well another whip cream lover... cool. there's a play on words somewhere there I think.. Parker |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ Just too  *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I don't know where their minds are at but I do know that I can whip some cream for you. Loved the presentation and I will have to learn how to do these things called Haikus and Senyrus. Enjoyed the reading. ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey Handsome "Delicate sweet dance Chase by tongue and lips of mouth Cream of taste delight" I stuck my uh........my uh.......in the cream........  .........I have to remain PG so use your imagination ok?These are very nice........( I see you in a cowboy hat and cream...........nothing else......) -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
James, just gonna say I enjoyed the heck out of the read...don't wanna put my foot in my mouth around these wild women. See ya... jwesley |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
heh heh..you dirty dog... you write these things just to see how many women with dirty minds you can line up on their knees...i know about you lovepuppy...  if i promise you cream....you wanna lick the, uh..bowl................ hugs, g < !signature--> "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, your a sugar lover too.. no doubt. SEA, me all covered with cream.... hmmmm, just how am I to get it all off. jwesley, go ahead they'll love you for it. dg, like I said before... its just a poem about whip cream.... where is your mind at. maybe you should describe what your feeling in more detail... Parker |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sweetie.........I'll give you 3 guesses and the first two.....don't count |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Parker...I'm lactose intollerant.  got any non dairy cool whip? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 love your mmmm ....sweet senryusCharisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
mmm..no.. more detail would get us both kicked outta here love! or...is that what you were hoping...................you devil! g |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, well I'm hoping it includes alot of whip cream licking. Martie, I sure do just for you. Charisma, hmmmmm thank you. dg, devil..... come on really.. what devil would be covered with whip cream. Parker |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Parker, This was deliciously, delightfully devilish, and sensuously, sinfully sweet. Loved it! Kris All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Correct! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
warmhrt, so your saying you have a sweet tooth too. SEA, ok start licking. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Naughty, naughty, Park! Whatever will Santa think??? Core |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ok, wait..i want in on some of that licking..... lol.... gale |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, naughty is as naughty does... Santa is probably saying go for it Corinne. dg, oh I got lots of whip cream left for ya. Parker |
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