Open Poetry #11 |
Starlight Serenade |
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Starlight Serenade-Robert E. Michaud Jr.- |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful word pictures..very very romantic and so nicely structured too..good stuff! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and a beautiful heart it is.. loved this As my heart awaits your breathless surrender ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
"Lovers serenade under blanket of starlight" Beautiful! Loved that line especially! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
SSsshhh!! Bob, (whispering) don't let on we Christians can be romatics....nobody knows!!! ya know I loved this one. |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Lovely sentiments,wonderfully expressed.Enjoyed mucho. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very creative...i enjoyed the visual art also |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it Bob..very creative indeed..thank you enjoyed... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lighthousebob...terribly creative and sweet!! curious...do you work at a lighthouse or are you simply a lighthouse lover like I |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
ethome, Thank you for your very kind comments. (blush)...and you said romantic? (double blush) I am glad that you liked my feeble attempts at courtship. Bob <>< Wynter, I love that name... and I am glad that you think that my heart is beautiful. May we not be in waiting long. Bob <>< Dreamkeeper, Now, I believe what you say about that line in that you are a keeper of dreams and all... I can understand how a blanket of starlight can be a beautiful thing. Bob <>< Compassion, I love your name as well! I see that you have learned how to post the little smiley faces now... Oh, and We will keep our little secrets. Luv Ya! Bob <>< Tony, Muchas Gracias Senor! I am so glad that you liked it mucho. I appreciate your kind responce. Bob <>< Kaile, You know us men... we are very visual. Bob <>< Victoria, I've enjoyed your posts as well and I must say that you are by far the more creative one, but I am glad that you enjoyed my heart. Bob <>< VAS, Hum..... Yes I am a Light House Lover. The lighthouse is a symbol of who I am. I am a Christian which is a House filled with God's Light... and I am a Lover of Jesus Christ. I am so glad that you are a lighthouse lover too. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Well, sir, I am mightily impressed with the heart..and very impressed with the poem. It's beautiful! May we use it in the Valentine issue of Digital Passions? |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sharon, Yes You have truly blessed me with your approval and your wanting to publish in the Valentine's Issue is a double blessing for me. Thank you very much. Bob <>< |
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Big_Dude New Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 2 |
Wonderful poetry, Give your heart and recieve love anew! Big_Dude |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
LH Bob* This is spectacular!! It will be a joy to see it in the newsletter...but not to take away from seeing it here...like a sneak preview the format only added to the beauty in the imagery that you wove...exquisite writing~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Big_Dude, I believe a big W E L C O M Eis firstly in order here....and now, I agree that if you give your heart that you will receive love anew. Proof is in this post! I gave my heart (my poem) and I have been lovingly received. Thank you, Bob <>< |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Holly, I am glad that you were able to view it here as well... because if not, I would have missed out on your appreciated comments. Thanks for your support and kind words. Bob <>< |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
bob beautiful imagery beautiful love <>< Love is the law, love under will. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
J.Locke As you know His love is Calling Us all to Come out... Bob <>< |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Anyone that has taken the time to read your poetry knows that the heart it comes from is one that is blessed with the silver of the heaven's in it and this piece really sparkles with that special appeal. Loved it my friend and will be seeing you in SJ soon. I have been a way for awhile doing the moving thing but I have not forgotten the map nor the route. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Mark, (tripple blush) I forgot to include the silver lining... Hey, won't that last move be a doozie? No packing and no unloading, we'll just show up as we are. Thanks for the nice compliments and I am glad that your are back. Bob <>< |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bob, this is so great, having you share your wondrous gifts ALL OVER PASSIONS....whether here, or there, it is always so wonderful to see your name.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sunshine, I'm just a little light with a vast ocean before me. I'm glad that you like my name. Hey, did you know that BOB spelled backwards is.... Love Ya. Bob <>< |
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