Open Poetry #11 |
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Inspired by CocoBaci . . . Whispers of remembrance . . . |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whispers of remembrance Oh, the whispers of remembrance Tickle not the ear When memories we wish to hide Spring forth and kindle fear. ~*~ The fear of hearing thoughts long dead Buried in our mind Disables us in happy times Remembrance not so kind ~*~ Grateful are we who can recall Those sweet memories. Truth be told, a majority, Yes, will put us at ease. ~*~ We think of love lost and it hurts. The remembering. Forgetting the deep joy we felt That love, alone, will bring. ~*~ We were so loved and it was fine To bask in love’s glow. Yet, love is never gone away It just rests there below. ~*~ Below the surface of our mind. Underneath the skin Of callous thoughts protecting us Lest we let love back in. ~*~ But when that next true love arrives As it surely will We rejoice and begin anew, Our fears becoming nil. ~*~ Oh, yes, those thoughts will still be there Buried very deep. Covered with new, true love you see Knowing our love will keep. ~*~ Rest easily there in love’s arms You DO like it so. Go on with life, it will not wait, And let your true love show. ~*~ Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To love, to love, true wrapped, warped in the depth of you true, to love, to you Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Reality Everchanges Mysteriously Embraces Melancholies Binding Reveries Acclaiming Niceties Caressing Empathy Sighing endlessly.... INTERLOPER, U made me cry with the tears of cleansing a soul's plight... An incredible write my friend and a keepsake for me to 'reflect upon' in the many days to come.... ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Doing some heart touching here........... ![]() |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes this would touch the heart. Well done, dear one. This is beautiful and tender. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Interloper. . . she does inspire does she not?? and a beautiful response from her as well. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine~ You make my heart flutter with delight. CocoBaci~ I am touched that my verse touched you so. SEA~ Touch mine just a little to the left ... ah, thank you. Startime~ *sigh* and *sigh* Sven~ You speak only the truth. Thanks ![]() Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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