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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2000-12-07 08:23 AM


Passions In Poetry


Poetic minds in symphony,
Amidst these pages blue;
Silent souls in rhapsody,
Salvation found in truth.
Innocent reality,
Oasis for the soul;
Nourished in totality,
Serenity unfolds.

Infinite camaraderie,
New friendships to be blessed,

Pledged in words so lovingly,
Obtained in heart-felt quest.
Etched in life, this revelry,
Triumphant in these walls;
Resting in tranquility ...
You yield to Passions' call.


/Kit McCallum


*Just because I've had so little time here recently, and I've missed everyone!!! Have I told you lately how wonderful I think you all are? NO? Then consider yourself {{{hugged}}}      

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[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-07-2000).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2000-12-07 09:05 AM


Kit love, this is wonderful, and hugs right back to you, and you have been missed too. I've missed seeing you're smile and your brilliant writing, don't stay away too long kid, poetry is good for the soul you know. I know it's work and everything else, but I need you here as much as you need to be here.
Take care    
                     
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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2 posted 2000-12-07 09:15 AM


(((hugs))) back at ya....and you've been missed too, great to see your post again, and I recognize the problem, I need more time too , to hang around inhere.

admire your wonderful poetry.

Charisma

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3 posted 2000-12-07 09:46 AM


This is perfect!! Nice to read you again..    
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This is PERFECT!!   Warm hugs right back to ya!!   -SEA
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5 posted 2000-12-07 09:53 AM


Purrrrrrrrrfectly done  


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6 posted 2000-12-07 11:00 AM


Very beautiful kit..well done.. HUGS

            ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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7 posted 2000-12-07 11:19 AM


Kit,

    Boy you made this look easy!  hehe.  Very well done   We have missed your poetry also. It is always wonderful to see something new from you.  ~hugss~ right back to you

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8 posted 2000-12-07 11:22 AM


Oh, I am green with envy! This is wonderful. and to make  it hold rhyme! Bravo.
Simply wonderful piece here  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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9 posted 2000-12-07 12:25 PM


This is wonderful.

I am glad that I found this place.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


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10 posted 2000-12-07 05:46 PM


This is beautiful, Kit!
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11 posted 2000-12-07 07:40 PM


Yep, I agree, very beautiful, Kit!

Denise

Kit McCallum
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12 posted 2000-12-08 11:03 PM


~Marsha:  I'm trying Marsha ... the office is "slowly" getting back to normal, lol, thanks for these lovely words!  

~Charisma:  Thanks so much Charisma, too bad we can't just live here eh?  

~Sharon: Thanks Sharon ... happy to be finding a bit more time again.  

~SEA: Hugs back to you again SEA ... thanks!  

~Interloper:  Puurrrfectly wonderful response, thanks Interloper!  

~Victoria:  Thanks so much Victoria ... hugs!  

~Rosepetals:  It was a fun one to do Rosepetals, but no, I won't say easy, lol ... thanks so much for the kind words!  

~Dragonpoe:  Thanks for commenting on the rhyme Dragonpoe ... this was a bit tricky, many thanks for the encouraging response!  

~Passions Voice:  Me too Passions Voice ... me too! And thank you for reading!  

~Elizabeth:  Thanks so much Elizabeth, I'm very grateful you enjoyed!  

~Denise:  Thank you Denise ... I always appreciate your responses!  

Much appreciation to all,
/Kit

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13 posted 2000-12-10 10:23 AM


Kit~
What a delightfully done acrostic.
Now I'm snug-as-a-bug-in-your-hug !
Love you, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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14 posted 2000-12-10 10:31 AM


...And a PASSIONATE hug for you as well, Kit...
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15 posted 2000-12-10 10:34 AM


you are missed sweet lady...
take care of what needs to be done...
we will save your spot  
well done acrostic tribute...
hugs right back at ya
later-gotta-go-to-work-gator  
jm

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if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

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16 posted 2000-12-10 10:38 AM


Very good. I like the style and content. Great work.
love and light,
Richard

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17 posted 2000-12-10 10:55 AM


I am glad I had the opportunity to pop back when i did....... what a wonderful poem



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18 posted 2000-12-10 11:16 AM


This is great, Kit! From top to bottom, you're the best!!  
Kit McCallum
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19 posted 2000-12-10 11:37 PM


You have no idea how much I needed this tonight!!!

~Marge:  I Love You ... simple and pure sweet friend!  

~Nan:  Needed that ... many, many thanks to you!  

~Janet Marie:  I'll take those hugs and hold out for more if thats OK ... love ya!  

~Maxtec1:  Much love and light shining right back to you Richard, thank you!  

~The Lonely Stranger:  Many thanks to you for popping back in!  

~Balladeer:  From top top to bottom, middle to side ... I love your responses always, and needed it tonight ... thank you Michael!  

Much appreciation to all,
/Kit

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20 posted 2000-12-10 11:45 PM


A wonderful poem, Kit...Hugs back!
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21 posted 2000-12-11 12:41 PM



Kit, you are such a darling
Here's a a teddy bear hug right back at you

coco
Oh I forgot to tell you..
The acrostic is great
But then again you'd know this
Because I just adore them
And you write this one splendidly...




[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-11-2000).]

Kit McCallum
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22 posted 2000-12-11 06:05 AM


~Martie:  Thanks you Martie! And hugs right back at ya!  

~Coco:  Awwwww ... that is adorable ... I loved this, thanks Coco! I've now been bear-hugged!  

Much appreciation for starting my day off with a smile,
/Kit

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23 posted 2000-12-11 10:06 AM


What a great acrostic....have missed you too  
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24 posted 2000-12-11 04:15 PM


Well my friend, it is just like you to take the time to find a new way to touch us all.  You will never have to worry about feeling bad for the time you are away from here, just know that we will wait as patiently as we can for you and when you show up in the forums if you are swarmed with hugs you will know that it is because we all love you so much.  Now for that challenge.  I know...TIME is hard to come by right now so NO HURRY!!!!!!  Knowing you though, it will only take about 3 minutes to come up with a delightful answer to my challenge.  I am giving you this as my gift this year because you enjoy them so much.   Well, you did say that now didn't you?

The challenge----

An alliteration of 3 verses.  The first using the letter "K", the second using the letter "I" and the third using the letter "T".  Yeppers, that is right, it spells your name as that would be the perfect gift to me.  Oh did I mention, the subject has to be about Christmas.  Good luck and ENJOY MY FRIEND.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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