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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2000-12-07 04:11 AM

Evergreen & Willow Wishes

The scene is perfect...
Evergreen covered in a
blanket of natures glory
surround the frozen
waters, which circle
their special place
beneath the weeping shade

Two lovers with glowing
cheeks and sparkling eyes
hold hands as they
skate on a looking glass made
of their arctic tears, where they
had shed their pasts to become one.

Ice crystals hanging from
the willow add their prism
of color to the evening.
And the winds of West
fill the night with its music.

Luna smiles then blushes as
she hides her eyes away from
the passion below.

A small fire off to the side,
where he'll guide her to warm
her hands between his own, and
entwined fingers will trace the
new gold that consummates the bond.

Yes, it's a beautiful scene,
for a Christmas card.
One that I hold my pen above,
and sign it with my tears.

Snow
12/7/00
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"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice." snow

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 12-07-2000).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-12-07 05:51 AM

Beautiful poetry Snow...I like that twist at the end gives the reader lots of room to imagine what happened...but as I said beautiful love scene painted with great lines!!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-12-07 05:53 AM

This is beautiful in it's simplicity, I love nature, and this is seasonal and lovely!

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-12-07 07:18 AM

Snow~
This piece is jam-packed with imagery !
I could almost hear the wind chime of the
ice crystals on the willow -
blown gently by the winds of passion.

Very nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2000-12-08 02:41 AM

Thank you all very much. I value each and everyone of your comments.

Snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2000-12-08 02:50 AM

Snow-
   wow...this is absolutely beautiful!
   i just love the imagery...incredible..
   wonderful write..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2000-12-08 02:57 AM

vicky.. thank you !
it's always great
to see your thoughts.

snow

"...I am a river in winter,
quiet in the eyes of most
but deep,
swift and full of life
to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice.

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