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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If ever I loved It was the moment I saw That look in your eyes If ever I loved It was the moment I felt The warmth of your kiss If ever I loved It was the moment I heard The sound of your voice If ever I loved It was that moment in time If ever I loved |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
These are beautiful thoughts...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
If ever I read beautiful thoughts of love .. if ever it was just now!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, this is absolutely stunning, this is one of your utter best, it really is. Bravo, bravissima, wonderful writing from you. And I love it Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I just think you're wonderful ! 'If ever I loved It was that moment in time' *Hugs* to you for this thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Paula* This is so tender and delicate...I hope that you've shared this with the one it was inspired by...thoughts like this should be shared...beatuiful writing~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ girl......this is SO romantic!  Loved it!  -SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
and if ever I loved, it was the moment your heart touched mine... beautiful piece Paula, beautiful |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very nice, soft and appealing. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
WOW...I loved this.. So romantic..I'm sure we have all felt this way a time or two... ~LL~[This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
If Ever there was a love so nice you've captured it Paula, Very nice Rich |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
absolutley beautiful. i know these thoughts so well... simple and rhythmic...i dig it. I was thinking of the immortal words of Socrates who said, "I drank what?" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I could relate to every line of this (although verse two was only in my dreams, it seemed real at the time, and I sure hope nobody was watching me sleep at the time, if ya know what I mean...) heh heh. Beautifully penned, Paula. A sweet, soft lyric! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PAULA, a twirl of romantic expression in this one you have my eyelashes 'aflutter'... A beautifull write Psst... I must remind myself (which I do rite now) to clic that thread button coco |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
If ever I wanted to read your poetry again,If I ever told you how much I really liked this |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, If ever I loved. What beautiful words, a very passionate way of showing how much you care, and are prepared to love. This is so tender and heartwarming. I wished I could put my arms around you now to say how wonderful you are. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula, So sweetly softly romantic words I loved it. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, I remember that feeling. Sandra |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James... I am happy you liked this sweet friend ethome...you are so very sweet to say so sweet poet man Marsha love...I always count on you to heap praise on my scribbles...thank you Marge...I thank you sweet lady...your words just made my day...hugs right back to you Holly...No I havent shared it yet...but I might I just might...thank you Sea...I am so glad you liked this one dear lady...thank you VAS...I'm happy if I could touch your heart...thank you Dragonpoe...thank you for your kind words Lady Lightning...thank you I'm glad you liked this Rich...what a sweet thing to say my friend...thank you Ethan...its so good to see you back among us and I am happy you "dig" this...lol...thanks Serenity...LOL oh LOL yes I know all about THAT kind of sleeping...thank you Coco...oh you sweet thing...to add this to your library...thank you so much Vandana...why thank you...I appreciate your kind words Daniel...thank you so much my sweet friend...and I can feel the hug all the way across the ocean... rp25...Im glad you loved this on...thank you Sandra...and you will feel them again dear lady..thank you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If ever there was one that could see it then it would be you. Wonderfully written and very tender thoughts. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...thank you cowboy...its nice having you reading and writing again |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Paula, such beautiful words. I remember the feeling.....thanks for reminding me. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Dee...and what a glorious feeling it is...thank you |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I can only echo what has already been said, Beautiful! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
EagleOne...you flatter me sir with your sweet words...thank you |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Amazing write Paula Your heart is so warm in this |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Insect...well it helps to have a little inspiration hehehe thank you |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely peice. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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