Open Poetry #11 |
December Depression (An Alliteration Poem) |
mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
December Depression ******************** Dark dingy dismal December days, dominate my depression. Dense despondency deliberately dictates a dreary dawn. December's deceptive divinity, disguises my dicontented dreams. During December's detaining dusky duration, deep dysphoria damns me. mutington/joyce "I can live by myself, but not within myself." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is very cleverly done! I liked this, but I really like the dreary weather......just me.... -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mutington~ Very, very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Despondence dutifully done ... WELL done! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
mutington, Very well thought out writing. Perhaps this is the reason BC is down during December? BC |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent!!! this is D'vine!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dashing descriptions dancing deftly down document! |
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