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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Evergreen When its hue is true Love is as the Evergreen through all the seasons [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's it right there! That's it! that's why you are a minister....praise the poet! That's such a great way to say it...."the evergreen through all the seasons." loved it! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful metaphor, poeminister.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Hello, ethome, and LoneWolf...thank you both for your kind comments. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Simply beautiful and very true words. Deb |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Poe, this is sweet...... Ya know I had a thought earlier today of evergreen and now I flip the pages and here I find a PoetFriend writes a rhyme that speaks of purity in hue of green... I enjoyed this treat of a read thank you... coco |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like it.. haiku's are tough They really are...they have to have enough force in three lines to reach a reader.. and this does it for me K |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes.....wonderful haiku..love it. Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
BloomingRose-- Thank you CocoBaci--Thank you. Glad you liked. Severn--Hello. Thanks for stopping by to read and for your kind comments.. Charisma--Glad you enjoyed take care, Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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