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For The Men of Passions....challenge |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Come, get lost in the zodiac of the sky amongst the moon, stars and the planets love shining in the mansion of the night two celestial bodies upon an imaginary sphere nestled safe within the vault of heaven safe within the constellation of your arms let us make love within the universe heavenly kisses between shooting stars i your ~Venus~ and you my ~Apollo~ exploring the cosmos far beyond each heavenly kiss a sign of love from me within the moonlight above rising tides until the third planet from the sun arms of gravity steal you away from me A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Is that an invitation ? I'd love to, I've always woundered what space dust tastes like . It does feel kinda' heavenly doesn't it, the feeling of being needed, When it happens to me I always feel over the moon for sure . Great poem, I loved it . Thanx . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
truly the stars shine a little brighter tonight my friend. . .  --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Where do I sign up huh where? What a trip that one was..... whew great images!! |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
can i come too????? great peice. and if you really wanna make a trip, let me know. heehehehhehelove ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Tom..so glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in.. Sven..thank you..yes they certainly are ha..nice to hear from you tonight.. ethome..ill send you the directions ha..thank you ethome ..always appreciate your comments. jesse..he he yourself haa..bad boy jesse..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Victoria, I'm not surprised. I've always considered you a heavenly body |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This should get at least 100 replies, what man could resist! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thanks Deery..but dont get your hopes up haa...  Katheleen..thanks but so far i have about 90 more to go ha...thanks for peeking in the mens room haa...  A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria this is nice...heavenly kisses...do you think they kiss in heaven...I know I will if I still have lips...ha...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you James..and yes i think they do..  im sure angels have lips too. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
Victoria, what beautiful images, wow! you do have a way with romance!! lovely, *S* Z "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Zyell..so nice of you to peek in tonight..HUGS.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Absolutely Beautiful Victoria - Great response to challenge ~S~ I really wish I had more time to write |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I wish you did too billy..so glad you enjoyed my friend..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Being a Martian wishing I was Apollo I observe your love Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I accept your challenge and gaze into the Heavens, your words make the view all the more beautiful. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you interloper..my martian friend brain..thank you for peeking in today ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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