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kaile
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0 posted 2000-12-05 11:21 AM


Struggling to march forward
in this abusive
education system,
finally an undergrad,

it may seem insulting
to most
that i
wash the dishes,
wipe the tables,
throw the thrash,
pacify agitated customers
all in a day
of my meagre pay
work

i just feel
theres something therapeutic
about using your own bare hands

(not your self-worth
as perceived from being an undergrad)

to earn your own money



© Copyright 2000 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2000-12-05 11:45 AM


I am proud of you
who ever you are
For you work for
what you want

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2000-12-05 12:01 PM


That's how I earned my degree. I worked fulltime during the day and got my degree at night.

I, for one, am very proud of you.  It will stand you in good stead for the future.



Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
3 posted 2000-12-05 12:33 PM


lovely way of stating the struggle

lovely way of looking at the aim toward victory

I worked full time, raised a teen-age daughter and took ten years to get through my collegiate journey, but I made it.  It was finally paid for this year, too, 11 years after graduation.

It can be done.

ethome
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4 posted 2000-12-05 06:55 PM


So true I'd say ...got some sand in ya there kid!! keep it up!!
angelswing
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5 posted 2000-12-05 07:48 PM


I'm glad that your contented, you should be happy for who you are, I'm happy working in a nursing home, it's fun . Hope the future is just as bright . Nice poem .
Thanx .
L.of.L. Tom .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-12-05 08:01 PM


It isn't the amount you earn, it is the heart and soul and dedication that you put into it and I have no doubt that you shine and are worth every dime in the mint.  Wonderful write from you and thanks for reminding us what is truely important when it comes to looking at someone in this light.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Sven
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7 posted 2000-12-05 08:04 PM


indeed there is kaile. . . would that we all would look at things this way. . .

well done my friend. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-12-05 10:38 PM


kaile,

Well said.  Be proud of what you do.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
9 posted 2000-12-06 05:49 PM


Kaile,
  Work is not who we are, it's just what we do! As long as we do any task honorably no matter how humble, we do ourselves Proud!
Wishing you much success in school and in future career choices!
Your friend, Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Mon Cherie
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10 posted 2001-12-05 07:19 PM


Kaile,

It's not what you are, but WHO you are that matters.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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