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Within Your Words- For Passions Men (Ladycat's Challenge)
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Within Your Words- For Passions Men (Ladycat's Challenge) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I find within your words A key to unlocking a part of your heart A piece of your soul A corner of your mind ~*~ You give me pieces of you A treasure immeasurable Allowing me to see, to hear, to feel Your innermost feelings, thoughts, needs ~*~ You trust me with the knowledge I find within your words Showing me such vulnerability All the while radiating courage~ strength ~*~ You share with me the magic, The romance of a thousand lifetimes And touch my heart in such ways I know I will be forever changed ~*~ Our hearts beat in tune We are together as one I feel you ~ I know you Within your words ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
As we know you my friend. . . Wonderful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
SEA i like this but you know that cuz we know each other yuh? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is absolutely the best of the best. You've blown me away with this, you really and truly have. This is excellant, truly outstanding, and you know I love it don't you, yes of course you do. Wonderful Circe, really wonderful Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sometimes I think Marsha might just be a mite too effusive in her compliments - not this time, I echo every word ~S~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Our hearts beat in tune We are together as one I feel you ~ I know you Within your words ================================= To never see or meet one another, yet the words above are so true. Well said, 1derful SEA. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Guess I'll have to get in line but ... I'm yours Sea!! Beautifully worded my friend, outstanding tribute, but knew it would be, coming from you. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ thank you Walt~ yes, sweetie, I know  Marsha~ thank you so much! WY~ Hugs to you sweet man Interloper~ I hoped you'd like this JWesley~ thank you.....I think the line is short  -SEA |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, SEA, what a wonderful tribute! I wasn't sure at first that it was for me but I discovered the acrostic you hid so well! True, they are intentionally not in the right order but all of the letters that spell out Balladeer are cleverly hidden there! Thank you, SEA!!! Anybody ever tell ya that Florida is great this time of the year??? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
My dear sweet 'DEER, you are so clever! You know I am one of your biggest fans , and actually, I was in Florida from Oct-Dec.( a few years ago) and I think it's a most wonderful time of year to be there.......I loved Florida......the East coast is beautiful. So happy you read this -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Sea I am glad that I found this one way back ..... and yes as always I like it... thank you for sharing these magic piece with us...... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, yes I must agree this is a wonderful tribute. Thank you for posting it... You are just so sweet to do something this sweet. Parker |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ thank you for bringing it back up, I'm glad you liked this Parker~ hello handsome I wrote this because of you and the other wonderful men here.......you touch my heart and make me smile......hugs to you sweet friend -SEA |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
"The romance of a thousand lifetimes" What a WONDERFUL stanza, just WONDERFUL [This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA--Lovely tribute. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Bravo!!!Your talent shines brightly in this wonderful poem, dear one. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. All are as you say and I, for one am quite impressed by the quality of men at this board. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA, A treasure you have written, just beautifully done. Enjoyed reading this, and also the meanings of your words. BC |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, how splendid this write you have done for the poetmen of passions.... I say you excelled in the challenge by all means sweetie... My compliments dear friend... coco |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Wow...i had to bring this back up. One, becuase i like it, and two, i'm not used to seeing a poem for the guys in here. Usually its tributes for the lady poets. Very nice poem. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Anyone would be thrilled to have this written for them, it's lovely What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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