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Remember . . . A Collection of Haiku
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Remember . . . A Collection of Haiku |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Once upon a time My pure heart was held by thine Nothing was more fine Our love at its prime Even the sun would outshine The pleasure was mine Mountains that we climb Take us closer to cloud nine Above the tall pines This completes my rhyme Concluding with one last sign Through the night I shine ---------------------------------------------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
These are beautiful together Magnificent!  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
These are lovely. I am surprised how beautifully they say so much. Thank you. Much love to you from me. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
LoneWolf, Lovely haiku. Nicely done.. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
connect the haikus doo doo doo heheh cool |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
There should be a word for doing this with haiku. . . Wonderful LW. . . really wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
insect . . . Thank you! They just seemed to flow together. Startime . . . A lot can be said in very few words my friend. You are welcome. Poeminister . . . Thanks. Walt . . . Always fun to connect them. You just don't know where they'll go!! Sven . . . If there is, I don't know it. Thank you for reading. Glad you liked them. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey there my friend, you have indeed done a fabulous job with these haikus...well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes......love these wonderful senryus wonderful penned my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie . . . Thanks my friend. They just what came out . . . a shot at something different. Charisma . . . Thanks my friend. Glad you liked them. (((HUG)))Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lone Wolf- each of these is beautiful on its own... and together...a masterpiece... very lovely write.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
great job ..flowed nicely.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Really great Lone Wolf. And to make them all rhyme, truly an accomplishment. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vicky . . . Thank you. They seemed to belong together, but I didn't write them that way. Victoria . . . Thanks! Passions Voice . . . The rhyme just happened, I wasn;t really trying, but have been writing a lot of rhyme lately. I like them though. Thanks. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jennifer, this is neat, I've never attempted Haiku, don't know how! Maybe sometime I will......loved it. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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