Open Poetry #11 |
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Like No Other Love |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Here's a simple little scribble, written on the spot to keep my creative juices flowing. With Christmas coming too quickly, I haven't had time to sit and write, so I made myself. ![]() Once upon a time ago I was a heartless wench who ran and drank and cared little about the world. I made my promises to be forever free, and lived loose and wild and careless then it all changed. A part of me seperated and the seed of life took root Inside my body I could feel a wonderful magic blooming. The wild music of what used to be died down to a soft lullabye as I held him in my arms and marvelled at his beauty. There are days I sit back and wonder what would have become of me, if I had stayed within the waves of immaturity. But I never regret, no not ever for now I have two, and I sit and watch as they grow from babies to boys, and wait til they grow to men. And I know with every part of my heart that there is no greater love, there is no other love, that can minimize this that I feel. And I, who once upon a time thought that I would love no one. And allow no one to love me. [This message has been edited by dragonpoe (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this was so wonderful to read. You gave me a very loving gift in these words you call scribbles. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Isn't it wonderful how a little seed can grow and bring so much pleasure in our lives. Thank goodness it helps us grow up! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is wonderful.......I wish my scribbles turned out like this........ ![]() ![]() |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
A very well written "scribble" that is very touching. A wonderful tribute to motherhood! I enjoyed your work ![]() Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Scribble" on ... BRAVO! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a sheer pleasure to read..your love for your children shines warmly in this piece.... what Interloper said..."Scribble on" ![]() |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Thank you all.. ![]() With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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