Open Poetry #11 |
The Dream of Three |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
The Dream Of Three Karen Torbiak 2000 Together, side by side, they ride, the center taken by the He who leads the way with strength and honesty as He boldly move forward on the Path to freedoms light His horse is chestnut in color, with mane and tail of deepest black, many hands tall to seat the Man who sits firm and straight in His resolve to open paths to the need of all who are drawn to the open doors He offers He is dressed in bright blue for the truth and justice He upholds with silver threads woven to reflect the brilliance of His mission here within a space where time and distance do not prevent the spread of knowledge The sword at His side is of strongest steel forged in His heart where destiny has has gifted Him with talent and desire to fight the fight of freedom for all hearts that are weakened from the pains this earth has given Upon His right is She who sits upon a horse of midnight black who prances with the same glee his mistress has and is bridled in turquoise and gold to match the the flowing gown of turquoise with golden sash to also show Her mission is reflected by the lead of the Man who rides tall at Her side Her hair is auburn and is whipped around her face as She giggles with delight to be out riding upon the beach and breathing the tangy salty air of the ocean with these two who are most dear to Her in life and who share their heart with Her Her eyes dance with joy and love for these two and for the joint mission they share that is reflected by Her weapon which is a bow with which She shoots arrows of love into all who cross Her path that they may feel the strength of love embrace them and sustain them as they come into the Path of Freedom offered Their horses step in perfect time with determination they move forward, carring those who destinies have given them a path to tread as they ride upon the back of majestic steeds whose muscle ripple as they forge ahead upon the shifting sands of life but staying steady and firm in their resolve as two now become three On His left is She whose strength and love is reflected in the red flowing dress She wears with golden sash for the purity of Her mission to fight at the side of this Man who rides fearless Her horse is white like no other with bridle of red and gold where the sun reflects with brilliant light from Her steed who carries Her with pride across the sands of this beach of time and incredible beauty Her long flowing dark hair is lifted by the breeze as they ride along blowing out behind Her like a mane while freeing the beauty of Her features of flashing eyes that show Her passion for life and desire to defend all who come withing Her Path and partake of Her great, unselfish strength, granted to all At Her side hangs Her sword of gold forged with Her words that carry messages of great acceptance and understanding of the human mind deep into our souls where we are all strengthened by the lessons that She gives with heartfelt writing TOGETHER as friends they ride the sands upon steeds of strength and if you look carefully as you tread the Path of life you will see these three who together are one in purpose and love for all who have need of them to offer a home of safety and love like no other for they ride as one but separate along the beach of time with swords held high and voices joined in ONE FOR ALL AND ALL FOR ONE! THE DREAM OF THREE is love and freedom to live, understand and love in life as we all share our hearts and souls together with words from our heart and feelings from our souls that all may feel that this Path will be a place they can come and know they will be defended by Three whose hearts are one Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yet another BEAUTIFUL tale from your magical pen.......... "Her hair is auburn and is whipped around her face as She giggles with delight to be out riding upon the beach and breathing the tangy salty air of the ocean with these two who are most dear to Her in life and who share their heart with Her" Liked this part best........ -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
She on either side of He ... I dare not *sigh*, it might be taken the wrong way Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Another wonderful fantasy tale spun from your magical pen wand Karen.... marvelous images once again...great read!! ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . just amazing Startime. . . simply amazing. . . A tale well woven my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Wishmaster Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 24Luton, Bedfordshire, England |
This is wonderful Karen, I really feel this poem (almost too insignificant a word to descibe this). I am silently whispering in awe. Wishmaster. ~ You cannot be what you want to be if you do not know who you are ~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
startime, This is awesome writing my friend. Your imagery is breathtaking. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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