Open Poetry #11 |
Dream Weaver’s Night to Remember |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dream Weaver’s Night to Remember Karen Torbiak 2000 She stands enveloped in the black velvet softness of the night The gentle breeze lifts auburn locks to blow gently across a face of serene beauty Her perfect form is wrapped in a flowing turquoise gown as soft and delicate as a butterfly’s wings Her gaze is drawn upward to the heavens and her lips part slightly with awe at the power shown in this great expanse The brilliant twinkle of the stars blink a pattern of music keeping time to the beat of her heart On this clear moonless night she dreams a dream in her very soul of one strong enough to make her his A star streaks across the sky as she grabs hold with her eyes and sends a wish on high Though this night is moonless she can see the shape of rolling hills before her There seems to be a brightening of light forming beyond the closest hill She feels only a sense of question for this is her world and in it there is no room for the fears that haunt mankind As she moves towards the light her heart skips a beat as if in response to something her soul finds familiar Walking to the rise of the hill she sees the outline of a man approaching from the far side of the hill The light seems to emanate from him casting a soft golden glow all around him as he moves forward With a gasp of surprise she soul reaches out to touch he whom it has known through all time As their eyes lock in recognition they are both flooded in the golden light filling them with a warmth of contentment Drawing close they embrace with such natural ease that if observed one would think they had been one forever Firm lips descend on hers laying claim to the sweet purity which is hers alone to give The velvety softness of the night enfolds this pair as they share the fulfillment of a love long desired from their souls She feels the strength of him enter her, accepting the gift she has offered as these two become one in the dance of love Afterwards with a smile of softest contentment she lies in the protective circle of his arms knowing it was for him she was created Opening her eyes upon the darkness of the night she finds herself alone but she smiles for Dream Weaver has again given her vision of eternal love and it will be a night she’ll remember Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow you sure are creating great poetry images they are really mystical...I enjoyed this very much Karen!! take care...ethome |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
always my friend. . . this is wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A star streaks across the sky as she grabs hold with her eyes ===================================== I love this. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Startime, a dream weave methinks. write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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