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This Woman................ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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You looked at her with a smile and a gleam in your eyes said "hello" with a purpose you didn't try to disguise So happy making conversation flirting as you please talking and laughing all with such ease You'd never know you're married that your left hand wears a ring of gold coming on to this woman so freely ~ so bold I couldn't tell you loved me it seemed you didn't care flirting with this woman with me standing right there. ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Uh-oh... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i would of just said..would you like me to leave you two alone?  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh no, such hurt and pain this would cause. My heart goes out to anyone who has ever experienced this. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Hmmmm I think I met a man like this Friday myself...Quite a weave Sea~ [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, this is a great poem, and have I been there, but from the other side of the fence. My ex was one of the most jealous person I have ever met. Well you know what I'm like Circe, naturally bubbly, he very nearly killed my spirit, not a pleasant thing to live through, but I did, and now it's just a bad memory. Love this one Circe, I really do, fabulous writing from you. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lemme at 'im! Unfortunately there are far too many of my gender that act in just that manner. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This better not be a true write about you or that man is nuts, more than nuts, he would have to be totally insane not to realize the treasure that he has in you. That is how I am led to believe that it is not about you. No man with an ounce of common sense would be that utterly stupid. You my friend are a treasure beyond measure. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ yep...... Victoria~ hell no.....I'd tell her to leave, he's my husband! Startime~thank you for the kind words  BDC~ well, stay away from him......yikes!  Thanks Mushy Interloper~ thanks for that. Mark~ is it any wonder I think you are the sweetest?! This did happen.......yesterday....I may have taken poetic licence with it, but my husband found the lady at the checkout counter at the grocery store fasinating, and flirted with her infront of me...it hurt! He is making strides to apologize to me....I was very cool about it and let him know he hurt my feelings with his behavior.....(I am so pleased with myself for not freaking out)  Thank you for caring.....I needed that this morning! Hugs sweetie ~SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well all I can say is that if he found her more captivating than you then she must have been the goddess of all the angels in heaven and I am not sure that would be enough for me to draw my eyes from you. You let him know that this cowboy would be more than happy to show his adoration of your beauty that I see and if he needs to borrow my eyes to see it then consider it done. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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