Open Poetry #11 |
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Guilty |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
Fire In your eyes coldness in your voice over taken by a hatred the smell of the outside world s ickens you you get pleasure out of torment grasping on to the life that passes you by with a smile (Laugh out loud with the guilty pleasure) so worried about the constent scrunity of the day before. Analyze each and every word that was said. With a Tear stained heart you push over the edge Knowing that civilization won't hold you back you get up and battle. Tamper with the disillusion of those who have "loved you" (Laugh out with the guilty pleasure) Feel those eyes at the back of your head You know whats catching up with you, can smell it with each passing step Left those feelings behind To cease to not exsist any more. Would all the pleasure He could take He (laughs out loud at the guilty pleasures) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions!! This is very well done, you really got me caught up in the type of person and I know what you mean. I love that line "laugh out loud at guilty pleasures." That line sure says a lot...it's a long old road that doesn't have a turn in it....ethome |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Birdee-- great write! very intense and powerful, spooked me a little (but that is good). made me also think a lot about life. take care. ~amy~ p.s. if you're new (i haven't seen your work before)...welcome to Passions! ![]() |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
BirdeeB, Well done, hope you keep on writing, there is so much talent here. "Left those feelings behind To cease to not exsist any more". Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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