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This Ache
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This Ache |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"This Ache" This ache in my heart is almost unbearable Like a sharp knife cutting deep inside The feelings that consume my heart and soul I simply can no longer hide You say that you love me And I know it to be true I tell you that I love you constantly However, I don't seem to be getting through My heart will never love another As it loves you my forever soul-mate Just as the winds are forever changing Our love was a destined fate But seems here lately Things aren't like they use to be Is it the miles that seperate us That make us too blind to see Or have we been fighting too long against others And started to give up hope and our dream The pain feels like it could consume me All I want to do is scream But would anyone know the difference If I lost you and my heart broke in two The would would keep on turning Though my life would never be complete again without you Please don't give up on us Fight with me for a little longer By the Grace of the lord and the light of our love We'll begin anew and be stronger Place your hand into mine Together we will find our way The strength of what we share Paving the road for a new day |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Amy Hold onto these last few lines as they are so full of hope and longing Place your hand into mine Together we will find our way The strength of what we share Paving the road for a new day I hope all turns out just fine for you hon All my love Tracie ~HUGS~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Amy, hold on love theres nothing more worth fighting for your lonliness will prove its worth  oh yeah, Hi hehe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, firstly this is a wonderful and beautiful poem from your heart. You will get through this, and although it feels like a test you might fail, it isn't and you won't. Destiny would never have brought you and Laura together if you were not destined for each other. I strongly believe in fate, and that we are here to feel the love that is all around us, HE would never deny us that, I do know. Keep faith with your heart, and everything will come right. Take care sweetie, and remember that while you are together in heart and spirit you are not apart. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so very sad Amy hon, I agree with Tracie, hold onto those few lines. *hugs* dear friend Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Place your hand into mine Together we will find our way The strength of what we share Paving the road for a new day ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ together you will find your way. truly a wonderful and also sad poem ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Please don't give up on us Fight with me for a little longer By the Grace of the lord and the light of our love We'll begin anew and be stronger Place your hand into mine Together we will find our way The strength of what we share Paving the road for a new day ============== those words say it all sweetie ... what an emotional, heartstring tugging, beautiful, plea you have written Amy... so well written and expressed ... hold on to hope and dont let go ... meant to be is just that take care sunshine love ya me I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a deep heartfelt appeal Amy....the grass is almost always never greener on the other side....why throw away all the love and time when you could work at it and make it fresh and new again...yeah I like the idea of this one...good writing there Kid!! ethome |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies. You guys always know just how to make me smile. Tracie, Thanks hon and for the hugs to. I wont give up the hope. take care.Jan--a special thank you for always believing in Laura & I. And to you Marsha, thank you for your friendship and support. Maree- you are wonderful my friend. thanks so much for your comments. Holding onto those lines for dear life. kevin- i hope you are right. here's hoping... Charisma- thanks sweets. take care.E- Thanks so much for your wonderful reply. means a lot to me. take care Love ya all, Amy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
don't let go my friend. . . Hold on. . . Great poem. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, I'll fight forever to be with you, you know that. Marsha has said it best though........fate and destiny wouldn't have brought us together if we weren't meant to be. Remember what Nick told you and hold on to that. I love you very much, you are my only one. Hang in there baby, the victory will definitely be worth the wait.  )All my love, Laura |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'My heart will never love another As it loves you my forever soul-mate Just as the winds are forever changing Our love was a destined fate' Hey Aim. I know I'm a bit late replying, but, anyway, this is beautiful. These are my favorite lines, but the entire poem is fantastic! Love it, m'friend!  -e ~~~~~ 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven... as always thanks for your wonderful replies. you make me S M I L E Laura... I know we will be together. Just as you know sometimes the waiting is very hard. And occassionally I have my "dark" moments and the need to write it all out. And yes Marsha did say it best Love you.Kris: awww thanks girlie! ya the best...glad you enjoyed this. take care ~~~~~~~ ~amy~ |
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