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One More Memory With You
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One More Memory With You |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Holding hands in the park Softly kissing in the dark Lightning flashing cross the sky I watched it reflecting in your eyes Every day I drift back to that night Watching movies from the bed Images rolling through my head Making love on rainy nights Then falling asleep in soft moonlight What I wouldn't give for one more try one more sunset by the sea one more picnic under the trees one more smile as i tickle your knee one more kiss from your sweet lips one more touch from your fingertips one more memory with you is all i need hearing you say good-bye Was the saddest moment of my life Then I watched you drive away With nothing left to say What i wouldn't do to turn back time "Don't wish upon a star...Reach for one!!" |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
One more memory of you, oh Jeffrey this is so warm and passionate, so often we do bring back memories of times we wish had never passed, One more time we do try to play it back with our memories and in our dreams. I enjoyed this very much. [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ You tug the heartstrings with this one. How lovely are the memories - how sad the goodbye. *Hugs* my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff~ "one more try" is what I wish I could give to you. this is so beautiful and touching though very sad. full of your heart and soul and it comes out splendidly across the page. really enjoyed this! take care. ~amy~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Rosebud, Marge, Amy....Thank you for the wonderful compliments. This was written for a special someone that fills my dreams and thoughts every day  |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
As always jeff bitter sweet, you always do lovely work but always so sad. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
All I can say is I totally understand where you are coming from and wish for that one more memory too.... Reading this was like looking into my own heart Well done, Great poem "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you bttrfly...(sigh) Martini....I wish you all the best ... yhanks for reading |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeff, What we wouldn't give for one more memory to add to the collection. Good-bye is always sad my friend. Remember, tomorrow is a brighter day. A wise man told me that once.  Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Jenn.....Thnx....Wish I could remember that all the time |
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