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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Her gown of sheer gossamer dances in the breeze as she smiles within the portrait of the day Windswept is her hair..her beauty cannot compare strolling within blue bonnet meadows A rainbow of dreams lost within the rain pastel wishes knocking at her window pane Her hair, pure white, in pale candlelight still in love with the ambiance of a dream Forgot his name long ago, someone she use to know within blue bonnet meadows, pigtails and pink bows A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I love the weave of this, Victoria  Blue bonnets are special, aren't they!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
The description of this is outstanding. Left me smiling. Well done! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like that..."within the portrait of the day." nice work all the way through.."within blue bonnet meadows," yep! great work!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
pepper..thank you for peeking in..yes they are..glad you liked pepper.. dreamkeeper..thank you so much and im appy you enjoyed.. ethome..thank you ethome..nice to hear from you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"still in love with the ambiance of a dream" Lovely, delicate images you've penned here Victoria ... beautiful sentiments, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
A beautiful piece,Victoria,mellifluous and enchanting. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much Kit and Tony..nice to hear from you both..appreciate your kind comments ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A rainbow of dreams lost within the rain pastel wishes knocking at her window pane so beautiful, this portrait of words...made me smile ~V~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you NT..glad you enjoyed..thanks for peeking today.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A rainbow of dreams lost within the rain Pastel wishes knocking at her window pane Her hair, pure white, in pale candlelight Still in love with the ambiance of a dream ============================================= VICTORIA, this is beautiful I so much like the above quoted verses you write.... Tender and touching thank you for the splendid read... coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Coco..i thought this was gone with the wind ha...glad you enjoyed..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, you do paint such beautiful pictures, and everytime I read your work, I feel the magic that you enclose in your words. Don't ever stop writing, my friend.....you are an inspiration!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sunny..what a wonderful reply from you my friend...poets like you inspire me to keep trying and keep writing.. HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria, another beauty you have written. As I read the words of this, I could feel your pen. BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much Bill..glad to see you back and looking forward to reading your poems again.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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