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It All Makes You Think- Repost |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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In my dreams Envoloped in darkness Within a house That intended to portray The house of the dead Never seen in reality Ominous and cold A basket with clothes Belonging to my Grandfather Laying near the place of flames Awake I could see all of this Right in front of me I heard chattering of voices Looking up I saw outside There were familar faces Only two I wanted to see The others do not matter to me My Grandparents with love Aunt, Uncle and Cousins Not vanishing away A few moments later They entered the darkness Grandmother sits in a chair Beckons to me to come I am not a child This running through my veins She says sit on my lap I do as she asks Not understanding Not wanting to stay I woke up right then And wanted to pray That I would never have another Of these dreams come my way "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Makes me want to write..! Sorry, I should say too... It hit a little to close to home for me but I love this. If only I could have been there. Very good good work if you ask me. Smile Dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Well Thank You Lucky!!! I hope it didn't make you sad consdering "it hit a little close to home"!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Very good writing here. I enjoyed, although a bit sad. Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very powerful piece laced with sadness. Wonderful penning by you on this one. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A lovely dream I'm sure many of us could relate to, and you tell the tale so well. Dee |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Well Thank You to you 3!!! Bridgette I'm sorry to make you all sad!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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