Open Poetry #10 |
Freedom Island..... (summer's over ... so sad) |
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Summers come to an end up here in Canada and it makes me think of a place on Georgian Bay, a wonderful little escape I don't see often enough. so here's a little repost to take you away. Freedom Island Do you ever dream, of those far away scenes, of places you've never been. Well not far from you, where the sky is so blue, and the water so green. Its not a dream, So come with me, to this inland Sea. In the dark of the night the sky is so bright with the northern borealis and the milkyway lights. Up there is a place, hidden from the race. An Isle on the sea and it waits for you and me its not a dream, an Island called Freedom. James Parker Haley [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So where do I book my trip at and may I reserve a spot for two. No cabin please just a spot on the beach beneath the milkyway lights will do just fine. Superb penning and YES, I often dream of such. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Let's go! Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you know you can take me along anywhere P-man and with your gift of imagery...you painted us a lovely summer scene ... you get to go to all the cool places... and im stuck here with this boring arch LOL later-takemetothebeach-gator me |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, the bus is waiting..... lets go poets. Thats what we all need a poets retreat to stoke the imaginations and let the northern stars embed our senses with renewal. Parker |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Can I bring my guitar along? /pip/Forum42/HTML/000084.html Just bumping you as there is NO way I will let this one die with only four. We need a full bus. TOO MUCH IMAGERY FOR SO FEW POETS |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
parker- count me in! when do we leave? love this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey baby! my bags are packed too!! lets get a move on!! nice little dream you paint... hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Vicky, and dg, hop right on lots of room in the back. Thats where the party starts... Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Cool repost James!!! Ok.......I'm there! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I love when I read you how I always visualize everything. Superb imagery here. Well, I am comming to........but...Ummmmmmm..Can I drive? LOL Jenn E |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, ok pack you bags... Jenn E, you can drive if you want.... its a loooooooong drive from out west. Parker |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Parker can I come too? I have such a need for such a place right now |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Love this poem!!!! Wait for me, wait for me!! I want to come!!!! Kelly You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ok, girls hop on the bus were ready to roll. Oh and pack some warm undy's its gettign chilly up here.. |
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