Open Poetry #10 |
You know. . . this feeling. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's hard to know what to call this feeling isn't it? You're not sure that you want to call it. . . you know. . . Not really ready to put that label on it yet For fear that it might be too soon Timing is everything here you know. . . And believe me, I do Things will be going along so well and then you blurt out. . . you know. . . and then where are you? It's pretty scary. . . But here's what you do know. . . You think about him day and night You see him in your dreams You smile more when you're around him His voice makes you weak His heart is good His sprit makes you feel better You can't wait for him to call He makes you feel special You give to him. . . and he gives to you. . . So. . .is it really. . . you know?. . . It could be. . . if it is. . . you'll know. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
Sven, If I didn't know better, I'd say you reached right into my heart and pulled these "you knows" right out of me! This one is a true gem to me, it hits very close to home! And I know.......but I fear! < !signature--> ~PanDol [This message has been edited by PanDol (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
I can sure relate to this one Sven. Can really be scary huh? Very well expressed my friend. Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 09-25-2000).] |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Sven Very well written. I'm sure that all the ladies want to know this feeling. They want the one that makes them feel special with a voice that makes them weak. There are men out there like that and it's you and I of whom I speak. Garfield |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Do you know" how I feel about your wonderfully romantic writings Sven? Beautiful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Very enjoyable poem. It simply couldn't be...YOU KNOW...when all that happens..could it? My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
sven! this is so cute heehee.. i love the way this reads.. its so ...you know..unsure..but pretty sure..but..well.. lol love this hugs, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I think everyone can relate to this feeling at some point in their lives. Very well written Sven. There is nothing more scarer then facing this moment, but not wanting to label it just yet. Great write, my friend Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
PanDol. . . so, you're in this place eh? It is scary I know. . . sometimes, you just have to go with it. . . thank you my friend. . . Juls, it can be scarier than you know! Thank you my friend. . . Garfield, yes, there are men like us out there. . . and most of them are here! Thank you. . . Kit, I have a good idea! Thank you my friend. . . Temptress, thank you. . . and if it isn't. . . you know. . . then what is it?? dg, well, um. . . thanks. . . I mean. . .um. . . thank you. . . um. . . yeah that's it. . . um. . . LOL Marina, so, tell us. . . what do you do when you face this moment? lol Thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Yes you will certainly know I like this very much Sven, so I'm sending back to the top Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
Ya, sometimes it's nice just to know, other times we need to hear it. This was really good. |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
I know...that feeling... and you did a beautiful job reminding me of what it feels like when ...that feeling... first comes. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
tracie, thank you my friend. . . Tears of Grace, I know that I like it better when you just know. . . but it's nice to hear it too! Thank you. . . Abra, glad that I could bring back some memories for you. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
The feeling may be scary, and make you extremely unsure.... but it's such a great feeling very well written I enjoyed this soooo much "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hi Sven, It's a really delightful poem, capturing the essence of new love..... oops...did I say that word? Anyway, I really liked it... sigh..I remember when..... voice trailing off. It must be l**e Linda Munday |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think I might be too old to know...because I haven't known for a very long time |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you know......*wonderful poem* and I love it....you made me know, looking forward to see more from you. Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Martini, yes it is. . . thank you Linda, you said it!! Great. . . now look what you've gone and done! LOL Thank you my friend. . . Passing Shadows. . . you're never too old to know. . . Charisma, glad that I could help you to see. . . . thank you ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, how you so well capture the innocence of... you know I must say I enjoyed reading this style of write from you it's so charismatic... you know And we can always rely on Sven to spin a weave of romance and mystery... you know Bottom line my friend I really like this one... you know! Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sven-Oh what a feeling it is, such sentiments, so beautifully put, but yet can be sad at times when you know, but the other person does not feel the same. |
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