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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-10-09 03:36 PM

The moon composed a sonnet fair
Oh quite an indelible feat
In iambic pentameter
For eons twas half complete

The moon bathed the world in beauty
The world reflects its shine
How'd the moon complete its sonnet
By discovering this love of mine

From my love which inspires me
I only reflect its glow
I can write sonnets completely
From this untapped well below

How'd the moon miss my love's beauty
For it reaches deep and covers wide
It is the one I drink when thirsty
And I am always fulfilled inside

Was the moon caught and mezmerized
By the waves in the gentle ocean
How can one be satisfied
By such superficial emotion

How can i not think longingly
The moon it just shines the earth
The true wisdom is in the well
Given by our Christ Jesus Birth

Look in deeper whispers chanting
Of many wise men old as moon
You will take up pail of water
And cast away the silver spoon

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-09-2000).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-10-09 04:31 PM

Look in deeper? Indeed I did...and I like, walt, I like, there is much cause for introspection here...and that last verse totally rocks...great job!!!

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

2 posted 2000-10-09 04:48 PM

nicely composed, Walt ... well done

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-10-09 05:41 PM

beautiful...loved it..

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2000-10-09 06:29 PM

thank you i am glad yuh liked..

thanks sen yuh

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2000-10-09 06:38 PM

Wow, this is really beautiful, very deep, love it Walty

Excellent my friend.

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2000-10-09 08:28 PM

thank you curtsey

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

7 posted 2000-10-09 11:45 PM

Yep.. definately a keeper... well written and expressed.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2000-10-10 08:50 AM

thanks mike for the pick me up..literally!!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2000-10-10 10:01 AM

W.O.W.,...wow...this is wonderful...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

10 posted 2000-10-10 10:58 AM

Walt you never cease to amaze me at what you come up with. This is a beaut my friend. A treasure and a keeper for sure.

Astounding work of art.

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

11 posted 2000-10-10 04:38 PM

thank yuh much miss dove and sunshine!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2000-10-10 04:49 PM

Walt~ you are so talented.....this is amazing. I really enjoyed looking deeper.

-SEA

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

13 posted 2000-10-10 04:52 PM

Walt, I really enjoyed this one. Glad I stopped by.
Dee

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

14 posted 2000-11-05 10:32 AM

The moon's pretty powerful until the ALMIGHTY is realized.

!que maravilloso!
"the moon bathed the world in beauty"

"Given by our Chris Jesus Birth"

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