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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2000-10-09 02:35 PM

Carolina Days & You
Amy M. Kennedy

I look up at the flawless Carolina sky
The same color of blue that reflects in your eye
No clouds to be seen, no a perfect Carolina day
And once again my thoughts turn to you
And I'm just carried swiftly away

Pine trees sway gently in the wind
A robin just flew by as I think of you once again
Summer is over and now fall is here
And if I shut my eyes real tight
I can almost feel your presence here

1000 miles seperate us two
But distance can't end a love that is true
'Tis true Indiana is not down the street
But im still reminded of the intensity
And the electrifying heat

But Seasons change, they come and go
Our love doesn't have to...tell me it isn't so
The embers of passion still burn just as bright
And I still remember the ecstacy we felt
As we left night...and entered sweet morning light

Autumn leaves are collecting on the ground
You call me up...your voice a beautiful sound
Telling me that you love me
I know you can't see it, but I start to grin
Looking out the window to watch summer leave
And the next season Autumn rolling in

*think things are gonna be just fine.*

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"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 10-09-2000).]

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

1 posted 2000-10-09 02:45 PM

I liked this. I too think of my absent love on beautiful days like the one you describe. Wonderfull work.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

2 posted 2000-10-09 04:30 PM

hi Amy ... you've made some nice parallels to a season's changing, without being too flowery (like me sometimes) ... very nice and from the heart ...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-10-09 06:59 PM

Very beautiful and serene

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-10-09 08:26 PM

Lovely Amy! You painted a closeness of two souls beautifully, even though such a vast distance separates them ... wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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5 posted 2004-05-16 08:39 PM

precious

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