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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-10-09 12:57 PM


Through my window
A looking glass
Pretty people
As they pass
Look the other way
All another day

I sit here
I’ll go down
And ‘neath rocks
I'll search for you

I took faith
I showed self
I thought if
Love was true

There's the sun
Shines my eyes
Beautiful girl

What if I said
It was a
Beautiful world



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-09-2000).]

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-10-09 02:34 AM


What if I said... this is a beautiful poem?   It really is Walty love it!

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2000-10-09 05:36 AM


Hey Walt

This is great...the verses are like individual beads strung together, to form one whole string...hope that makes sense!

Love the last one in particular, just the way it fits.

K


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-10-09 06:25 AM


Wonderful piece walt.....loved it
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2000-10-09 10:39 AM


to all ye 3 other side of the worlders thank you much!
Nan
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5 posted 2000-10-09 01:43 PM


In the eye of a beautiful beholder - the world is indeed beautiful...  
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
6 posted 2000-10-09 08:27 PM


i am a beauty
Mike
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7 posted 2000-10-09 11:47 PM


enjoyed muchly.  nicely written.
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