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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I see the light at the end of the tunnel my true love waits for me there is someone waiting out there someone who will proudly call us "We" I will keep my negligee of black lace and wear it some other time because next time it will be appreciated when our hearts entwine I will not be U.S. prime beef as he thought of me before I see the light at the end of the tunnel let our love together soar I need to feel loved not just maybe once a year I see the light at the end of the tunnel through the reflection of my tears I can see the light at the end of the tunnel my dream has come to an end but the light that shines in the tunnel will be more then a lover but a friend Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal. [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Keep your focus on that light and you will soon reach it. You are right in the fact that ANY relationship of love must have friendship above all. If not then it is NOT real.....take care and keep heading towards that light. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Mark..im not as desperate as the poem makes me sound ha ha..but very good advise anyway..  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You didn't sound desperate...just determined to be treated as you deserve....didn't mean for my reply to sound that way.LOL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice thoughts Victoria...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James...for peeking in.. |
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