Open Poetry #10 |
Love Sonnet -a Bit Silly |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
What has happened that I should love thee Without reserve without shame so fiercely What potion was drank what magic in draught Thought of life without you should make me distraught I wrote you poems of our consummation You wrote poems too my anticipation All I could dream is our conflagration I worry at times I get indigestion Oft do I dream you and I walking beaches Or laying in forests - live oaks and beeches My blood courses so I think I need leeches Dr. Seuss help me where are your sneeches? This sonnet is serious it also is silly Can't live without you my life's willy nilly ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This sonnet is wonderful with a combination of all kinds of feelings!!!! Isn't that what love feels like?? I enjoyed this tremendously! Follow your dream! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sunny1- Perhaps you're right - riding the roller coaster feeling - has been a ong time absent - I hope the ride isn't short - thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--this is precious and sweet..and only a little bit silly...and that's a good thing! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Not silly just wonderfully alive with love |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Wil, love it..it made me smile.. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie, Paula, Victoria- Thank you all for your kind words - I don't know what gets 'into' my pen at times - it must have been bitten by the same 'love bug' that got me ~S~ |
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