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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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Truth holds true in the eyes of the blind Join my taking hold of your soul As you feast upon mine Solitude caresses my mind Spin the memories round and round Release my salvation upon the world Find a friend in ones who loved but love no more Unlease the beast of burden Come back to me freedom Love lost and gained all at once I feel you deep inside me The pain eats me from the inside out I feel everything now You rub my head in it As I smother slowly Let me free so that I can be one again Loosen your grip I watch you fall to the ground Reality is not far from your reach Hold on to that and less on me Try to take me down too? Who do you think you are? Who knows what I have caused with all this? Never say that I didn't try For if I die before I wake I pray for heavens sake that you remember I Always Loved You.. Love, Ladycat < !signature--> Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. [This message has been edited by Ladycat (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A one sided love is never easy to deal with. The pain in this shows through vividly through your masterful penning. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
hear you, and can relate on this too... love your writing ((hugs)) Charisma |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Lady this is a bittersweet piece. Never say that I didn't try For if I die before I wake I pray for heavens sake that you remember I Always Loved You.. The pain we go through for love. You've written with much expression! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome home! It's so nice to read you again.  |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Coming back home to Passions feels so good especially when I know that I have friends like you. Thank you all!!! *Big Hugs* Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
You've penned some pretty powerful emotions here LadyCat. I can relate to them 100%, sad to say. I do not believe I've read your work before, but I'm glad I found this one. Welcome back to the Passions family!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
But if I don't cling so tightly, I might keel over, and drop my coffee, and set the carpet on fire with my smoldering cigarette, and knock over that cute little spindle table with the bric-a-brac of a kilted sheep on it, causing much hullabalooing, not to mention a physical bruhaha....  J/K Ladycat...this one echoed deep within my soul, stirring long banked embers. Beautiful, yet sad. I do hope things are better on your side of the State. Alicat If I were any more laid back, I'd be in a coma. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ladycat, this piece kept me going to the end because of it's flow, but the pain was evident. It touched me. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Powerful! I don't see enough of your work. Wish you would post more often, but I have come to understand time restraints.  Did I ever say I'm glad you're back? *Jenn* |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Never say that I didn't try For if I die before I wake I pray for heavens sake that you remember I Always Loved You..' Great ending! Sad, but excellent read! Welcome back! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent!!! |
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